I chose this setting because in the dungeon of the tent it compounded the desolation that Miriam was experiencing because of the error of her way.
Link to this piece:
http://faithwriters.com/wc-article-leve ... p?id=23041
ps I submitted Slant Rhyme when you can get to it.
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- Mon Mar 09, 2009 6:11 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--SETTING
- Replies: 26
- Views: 48098
- Thu Mar 05, 2009 11:52 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--SLANT RHYME
- Replies: 54
- Views: 68384
HOMEWORK
Hi Jan
Got my running shoes on again.
Avoiding my Saviour, I'd dithered all day.
He'd sent me a message but I had delayed.
Then further guidance from him was made
To get up and follow his every way.
I think it may be a bit forced.
Colin
Got my running shoes on again.
Avoiding my Saviour, I'd dithered all day.
He'd sent me a message but I had delayed.
Then further guidance from him was made
To get up and follow his every way.
I think it may be a bit forced.
Colin
- Thu Mar 05, 2009 7:48 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--RHYME SCHEME
- Replies: 25
- Views: 32463
RHYME SCHEME
Hi Jan Just 2 verses - I think I'm not too bad with the meters but I'm not sure about the stresses. That is why 2 verses! Dark Night of the Soul I'm lost in darkness, I cannot feel My way across life's muddled reel. It is a tangle. It is a mess. Please send your help in my distress. You are my morni...
- Mon Jan 12, 2009 11:10 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--REPETITION
- Replies: 38
- Views: 49359
Repetition
Hi Jan - I've just found this lesson! Jn 1vv1-5 In the beginning was the Word, and the the Word was with God, and the Word was God. He was in the beginning with God; all things were made through him, and without him was not anything made that was made. In him was life, and the life was the light of ...
- Mon Nov 10, 2008 9:51 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Onomatopoeia
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5979
Onomatopoeia
Jan - the first verse of Frankie Laine's "Mule Train" seems to fit the bill: Mule train, yeah, yeah. Mule train: clippetty-clopping over hill and plain, Seems as how they'll never stop. Clippetty-clop, clippetty- clop clippetty, clippetty, clippetty, clippetty, clippetty-clopping along. My...
- Mon Nov 03, 2008 7:32 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: anthropomorphism
- Replies: 20
- Views: 25086
- Sat Nov 01, 2008 6:17 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: alliteration
- Replies: 6
- Views: 12329
My Alliteration Homework
Jan I'm not sure if this is how to let you have my homework - I hope it is. I've not used the message board much; so I'm not familiar with it. Home work:- Will was wondering why Wendy's watch wouldn't work. I sank to the depths of desolation because of my depression. Kath came to cuddle and coax the...