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by Verna
Thu Dec 30, 2010 2:39 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for COMMUNICATION BREAKDOWN
Replies: 16
Views: 16930

Heartiest congrtulations to each of the special winners here. Lisa, I knew that would special story would have to be a winner, and I love to see you at the top of the heap! Loren, I should have known that gorgeous piece was yours. (You notice I loved it when I read it.) Michael, looks like you're on...
by Verna
Thu Dec 23, 2010 11:50 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for FOREIGN LANGUAGE
Replies: 19
Views: 19463

Congratulations to all the winners! Happy Dancin' for you!
by Verna
Thu Dec 16, 2010 4:41 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for BILLBOARD/POSTER/SIGN
Replies: 15
Views: 15619

Thanks for all the joy in the little yellow boxes and for taking time to read. I need to catch up on some I missed this week. I read some seriously good ones!
by Verna
Sat Dec 11, 2010 6:41 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Conclusion #1--the 5th judging conclusion
Replies: 23
Views: 30429

Thankyou, Phee and Jan, Your words were balm to my heart.
by Verna
Sat Dec 11, 2010 11:13 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for BODY LANGUAGE
Replies: 10
Views: 9954

Congratulations to each of you for recognition of excellence. Savor your EC placement.
by Verna
Sat Dec 11, 2010 10:43 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Conclusion #1--the 5th judging conclusion
Replies: 23
Views: 30429

My favorite of any poems I've written has a little twist at the end. FALL FEAST Watermelon, peach, banana, cherry, Pumpkin, lemon, plum, cranberry, Apples—golden, red, and green, Canteloupe, muscadine, tangerine. Our Father’s fairest feast of all Is trees fruit-frosted in the fall. For nonfiction--i...
by Verna
Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:21 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for ON THE TELEPHONE
Replies: 13
Views: 12369

Congratulations to all. Enjoy that "winning" feeling.
by Verna
Wed Dec 01, 2010 10:04 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Lesson 19--A Great Conclusion
Replies: 30
Views: 33793

Jan, I was thinking about several ways to end poems. One, used effectively, if not too often, is to repeat the first stanza. (Service's "The Cremation of Sam McGee"). Another way is to reword or add to the idea in the first stanza. Another is to summarize the poem's idea. The last line mig...
by Verna
Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:37 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Lesson 19--A Great Conclusion
Replies: 30
Views: 33793

Thanks for teaching again, Jan. I wondered when I wrote the ending to this poem if it was a little too obvious all the way through to the reader. I put a few verses to show what was going on before the end. Miranda Ant had slept all day, Which made the others mad. Said Andrew Ant, “I’m ‘shamed of yo...
by Verna
Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:44 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: LESSON 18--A GREAT BEGINNING #3
Replies: 36
Views: 64765

I'm not sure of many ideas for starting a poem, but one that's important to me is to start with the theme or main idea of the poem. Another is to have an easy-to-understand and interesting lead-in to what follows. Recently, when I started to read a challenge poem that just looked like a list of stat...
by Verna
Fri Nov 19, 2010 10:55 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: LESSON 18--A GREAT BEGINNING #3
Replies: 36
Views: 64765

So glad to see you back behind the teacher's desk, Jan. I've missed you there. Here's the beginning of a devotion I wrote for our church website. When I think of a dismal day, “Casey at the Bat,” a poem by Ernest Lawrence Thayer, comes to mind. The poem begins, “The Outlook wasn’t brilliant for the ...
by Verna
Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:12 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for CYBER-COMMUNICATIONS
Replies: 14
Views: 13526

Cyber congratulations here for your cyber honors! Not an easy topic, but some really excellent entries achieving EC.
by Verna
Thu Nov 11, 2010 2:48 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for GOSSIP/RUMORS
Replies: 16
Views: 15149

Congratulations on recognition for superior work! Enjoy your day!
by Verna
Thu Nov 04, 2010 6:38 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for WRITING A LETTER
Replies: 20
Views: 17282

Happy Dancin' with all the winners
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by Verna
Sun Oct 17, 2010 1:59 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: EC results--INNER PERSON quarter
Replies: 17
Views: 15767

Kinda late on the "uptake" here, and now that I've picked myself up off the floor--thanks, Jan for compiling this. No BOB's here--so I was really surprised. I've never been queen of anything before!

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