Please forgive me Glorybee. I've called you Jan...
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- Fri Jun 23, 2017 10:12 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
- Replies: 15
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- Fri Jun 23, 2017 2:22 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
- Replies: 15
- Views: 30521
Re: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
Hi Jan, by the time Deborah Porter reviewed my article "A Diamond for Maria", she suggested me that I should come to your class. Thanks for receiving me. Here is my second attempt on exercise 1, plus the exercise 2 and 3 (I'm sorry for the mistake regarding the length on exercise 1). Homew...
- Thu Jun 22, 2017 6:05 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
- Replies: 15
- Views: 30521
Re: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
Homework It was their third date. Josie's heartbeat speeded up when Charlie walked her through the theater's room. She stopped on the aisle for a moment, gazed at him, and smiled. "He seems to be perfect for me," she thought. Charlie tilted his head to the side and asked, "what? Why a...
- Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:55 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas in Direct Address
- Replies: 9
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Re: Commas in Direct Address
Thanks, Ann
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