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by Shann
Thu May 06, 2010 4:48 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
Replies: 65
Views: 178657

I know that my yellow boxes as been perceived as too harsh at times, and there have been many times that I've backed away from leaving them, not wanting to hurt anyone's feelings. It's difficult to leave constructive critique on an anonymous entry, not knowing if the writer's mistakes are a chronic...
by Shann
Thu May 06, 2010 4:21 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
Replies: 65
Views: 178657

Does someone send a "Welcome to FaithWriters" e-mail? I wonder if they could include "directions" to this class. Hmmmmmmm..... I try to be diligent when it comes to welcoming the newbies. I usually try to add a few paragraphs, telling what the site offers, invite them to hang ou...
by Shann
Thu May 06, 2010 4:06 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
Replies: 65
Views: 178657

You started this thread the week I was in the hospital so I didn't really have a chance until today, but in reference to this: TODAY’S QUICK TAKE: Shoulda, woulda, coulda What about "kind of" I use that frequently and my gut tells me it's not correct, but like you said we write like we tal...
by Shann
Tue Apr 13, 2010 10:21 pm
Forum: New to the FaithWriters Platinum (500)
Topic: Loving Faithwriters!
Replies: 3
Views: 4587

This is definitely the coolest place I've ever been to.
by Shann
Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:54 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics--Three Mini-Lessons
Replies: 16
Views: 24542

My grandmother used to play the card game Solitary. I misused it for years until I was old enough to understand my mom's explanation that it was Solitaire and it wouldn't be right to correct Grandma. The vegetable rutabaga was always pronounced rootabaggie. It didn't stop me from eating them but I'm...
by Shann
Fri Mar 26, 2010 1:49 pm
Forum: New to the FaithWriters Platinum (500)
Topic: Somebody pinch me!
Replies: 6
Views: 6663

This really is an amazing place. I can't believe how quickly I felt like a member of the family when I joined. I'm so happy that you have felt the love as well.
by Shann
Thu Mar 25, 2010 10:37 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for WOW!
Replies: 22
Views: 20298

Congratulations Everyone!.


You guys are all great! A special shout-out to my young friend Nicole for getting 1st place the first time out. You have talent Girl!
by Shann
Fri Mar 12, 2010 9:55 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for EEK!
Replies: 34
Views: 29901

See what you didn't understand, the weeks you didn't enter, I'd go into the archives to get a taste of PUP, so see you can be one of my favorites every week, even if you didn't enter! OK OK, but what ever you do, don't place a comment on "The Trumpet Sounds" I am going for a record on tha...
by Shann
Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:06 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for EEK!
Replies: 34
Views: 29901

Thank you again. My self-esteem has taken a beating lately, and I was afraid people might think I was prideful for commenting on the pieces. but I truly received so much more than the little I gave. It's wonderful to share other's thoughts and ideas. I feel I have been blessed by all of you.
by Shann
Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:17 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for EEK!
Replies: 34
Views: 29901

Well that can't be right. I haven't written but 3 in the past 6 months. :lol: psst pup: She's only been here that long. Oh... well in that case. :wink: See what you didn't understand, the weeks you didn't enter, I'd go into the archives to get a taste of PUP, so see you can be one of my favorites e...
by Shann
Thu Mar 11, 2010 5:26 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for EEK!
Replies: 34
Views: 29901

And thank you Shann for your dedication. Honestly, I don't see how the judges can do it. I tried once, when I first started up, to read through them all. I saw so many "GOOD" writers, it made me feel bad that mine was even listed among them. Now, even reading just the ones listed in the H...
by Shann
Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:58 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for EEK!
Replies: 34
Views: 29901

I've been wanting to read and comment on every entry since I found this wonderful place. I did it this week and the entries were great and made fun reading. Congratulations to all of the winners as well to everyone else who submitted an entry. I appreciate the blood, sweat and tears that go into the...
by Shann
Tue Mar 09, 2010 1:05 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
Replies: 94
Views: 127069

Dear Jan, I just wanted to thank you for your timely lesson. I had been playing around with humph and had a few typical ideas in mind. Last night I rethought and am now going in an almost totally different direction. My big fear is that my OOTB humph idea won't be OOTB because you so greatly inspire...
by Shann
Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:41 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
Replies: 94
Views: 127069

The first storm of the season, as the thunder and lightening sounded scary and looked like fire streaking to earth, which is really aliens in an UFO coming to see how many little girls are hiding under the bed afraid of lightening. What do you think did I get too weird? Maybe a little bit. Written ...
by Shann
Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:37 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
Replies: 94
Views: 127069

Here's my OOTB idea: The fire truck comes to school for an assembly. One of the kinders climbs aboard and hides. The firefighters leave with the child on board the truck. Told from the child's POV. Excellent! Or (purely personal preference on my part) written from the fire fighter's POV. Or...from ...

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