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by GreenLeaves
Thu Mar 04, 2010 4:24 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for SHHHHH
Replies: 32
Views: 12119

I do feel I owe you guys an apology as well. I haven't been able to do my usual reading and have missed out on some wonderful stories, I know. I'm having some health issues right now, some kidney problems that have cropped up. They are trying to figure out what is going on (go in for another catscan...
by GreenLeaves
Thu Mar 04, 2010 1:58 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for SHHHHH
Replies: 32
Views: 12119

Congratulations, Bear. You and me both!
by GreenLeaves
Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:56 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for SHHHHH
Replies: 32
Views: 12119

Thanks, Ruth, sometimes it's nice to feel like a little girl at 61. :lol:
by GreenLeaves
Thu Mar 04, 2010 12:43 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for SHHHHH
Replies: 32
Views: 12119

CONGRATULATIONS TO ALL! I am floored myself. I don't know what to say. Just getting a "highly commended" for the very first time is HUGE for me! I am so excited I feel like a little girl jumping up and down! :lol: And this time I didn't get very many comments, so I thought it was no good. Can you i...
by GreenLeaves
Wed Mar 03, 2010 12:06 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 41148

I just sigh when I read these other entries. What a creative bunch! You all are fantastic. Love reading your homework! When I grow up I want to be just like all of you. :D

Carol
by GreenLeaves
Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:40 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 41148

Thanks, Jan. That makes a lot of sense to me.
by GreenLeaves
Tue Mar 02, 2010 2:16 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 41148

Aw, Jan, I feel like I've just been given a great big hug. Thank you. This truly is hard for me. I'm just not that creative. In reading your story example, which I loved, by the way, I have a question for you. Here's the part I'm questioning: **** His wife cleared her throat again, and Paddy tumbled...
by GreenLeaves
Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:06 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 41148

Oh dear, oh dear...do I HAVE to? This is SO hard for me. I need to make this quick because I think I'm having kidney issues again. Here goes: Carol got up to clear the table she had so carefully laid for she and her husband. "Amy called today," she said. "Little Eli was showing his daddy how to put ...
by GreenLeaves
Thu Feb 25, 2010 4:59 pm
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Lesson Suggestion
Replies: 7
Views: 6467

I just thought of something else I could use some help with.

It was me.

It was I.


All those I/me issues, you know?


Thanks. Your lessons are helping so much!

Carol Penhorwood
by GreenLeaves
Thu Feb 25, 2010 11:08 am
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for Phew!
Replies: 15
Views: 7927

I'M SO EXCITED FOR ALL OF YOU. CONGRATULATIONS!



Carol Penhorwood
by GreenLeaves
Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:12 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 54988

Jan, I'd probably write more dialogue if I wrote more prose. I know your classes will help me enormously. And the writing challenges are helping me get my feet wet as well. Poetry just comes so much more naturally to me. I've been testing the waters lately with the challenges but don't seem to do ve...
by GreenLeaves
Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:32 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 54988

I rarely write dialogue. I usually avoid it like the plague so this should be interesting. ***** "I really feel like I've screwed up my life. And I'm supposed to be a Christian," confided Melanie as she slumped down on the sofa crying. "I didn't know who else to talk to." Linda reached out, pulling ...
by GreenLeaves
Mon Feb 22, 2010 9:04 pm
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part Four)
Replies: 20
Views: 17929

:lol:
by GreenLeaves
Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:48 am
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part Four)
Replies: 20
Views: 17929

:rolling
by GreenLeaves
Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:24 am
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part Four)
Replies: 20
Views: 17929

Hmm...teacher's away....hmmm....

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