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by yvonblake
Mon Feb 16, 2009 4:41 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--SLANT RHYME
Replies: 54
Views: 42329

poems

I"ve been busy this last week and didn't get to join the class. I've also gotten a new laptop and have to retrieve some of my files(from my old computer) to find my poetry. I like to read slant poetry because they are almost like puns. They give that little twist just when you think you know what wo...
by yvonblake
Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:26 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--RHYME SCHEME
Replies: 25
Views: 20191

rhyme

yes... I had to let go of rhyme completely..and only work on the 3rd line. (the 6th line was the same each time)

But... It allowed me focus more on the flow and feeling of my words, not having to worry about rhyme.

Vonnie
by yvonblake
Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:23 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--SETTING
Replies: 26
Views: 27527

setting

hee, hee...me too! I haven't thought any farther past that!

Vonnie
by yvonblake
Wed Feb 04, 2009 12:08 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--SETTING
Replies: 26
Views: 27527

setting

I love research. I had fun looking up details for my novel set in Albany, NY, during the mid 1800's. A lot was happening then! My dice rolled: a mysterious stranger a waitress a basement the 1950's a goblet Veronica's ponytail swayed back and forth as she approached the corner table of the Cruisin' ...
by yvonblake
Wed Feb 04, 2009 11:51 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--RHYME SCHEME
Replies: 25
Views: 20191

rhyme

Jan, I attempted a different rhyme scheme for my UK challenge. (abcdec) Twixt day and night, ‘tis dreamin’ time, When e’re the sun is hangin’ low, And the rosy skies are glowin’ I ramble long over hill and dale And wish upon the evening star When I’m wanderin’ in the gloamin’. Wanderin' in the Gloam...
by yvonblake
Tue Jan 20, 2009 7:57 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--REPETITION
Replies: 38
Views: 29640

class

I fixed the markings on my song "Walkin' on the Water". It had been so long since I did it on the boards (been working on my blog) that I forgot how to do it! :?

Yvonne
by yvonblake
Tue Jan 20, 2009 2:50 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--REPETITION
Replies: 38
Views: 29640

class

I've been busy this last few weeks with my new grandbaby. It's thrown off my routine. Here's my addition to this class: "Walkin' on the Water" Here's another one: (the preface of my novel) Home… Home is the place that calls you with a haunting, echoing yearning. It draws you from among strangers, fr...
by yvonblake
Thu Jan 17, 2008 1:22 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winning Entries for "A Stitch in Time Saves Nine"
Replies: 11
Views: 5456

YEAH

Great Job, EVERYONE!!!! :superhappy

What a wonderful start to the year!

:grouphug2

Yvonne

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