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by Athayde
Fri Jun 23, 2017 10:12 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
Replies: 15
Views: 14403

Re: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL

Please forgive me Glorybee. I've called you Jan...

Thanks for the review. God bless you.

Eneida
by Athayde
Fri Jun 23, 2017 2:22 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
Replies: 15
Views: 14403

Re: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL

Hi Jan, by the time Deborah Porter reviewed my article "A Diamond for Maria", she suggested me that I should come to your class. Thanks for receiving me. Here is my second attempt on exercise 1, plus the exercise 2 and 3 (I'm sorry for the mistake regarding the length on exercise 1). Homework 1 It w...
by Athayde
Thu Jun 22, 2017 6:05 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL
Replies: 15
Views: 14403

Re: Be a Better Writer--SHOW, DON'T TELL

Homework It was their third date. Josie's heartbeat speeded up when Charlie walked her through the theater's room. She stopped on the aisle for a moment, gazed at him, and smiled. "He seems to be perfect for me," she thought. Charlie tilted his head to the side and asked, "what? Why are you smiling ...
by Athayde
Mon Jun 19, 2017 12:55 pm
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas in Direct Address
Replies: 9
Views: 64992

Re: Commas in Direct Address

Thanks, Ann

Eneida

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