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- Tue Sep 23, 2014 4:49 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TIGHT WRITING
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I've never done anything quite like this but here goes nothing: Doreen was fixated on her book through the noisy subway station. Noticing the man next to her she scooted against the window. As the train entered through a tunnel, the light faded from the page; she regretted not having her tablet. She...