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by alanrkane
Mon May 04, 2015 2:32 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--WORKING WITH AN EDITOR
Replies: 23
Views: 10718

Re: Be a Better Writer--WORKING WITH AN EDITOR

I have to pay my editor with cups of tea.

Or if really hard, doing the ironing
by alanrkane
Sat Dec 06, 2014 3:38 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be A Better Writer -- BIOGRAPHY
Replies: 24
Views: 11313

Re: Be A Better Writer -- BIOGRAPHY

How about a story that is retold down the ages by his family/descendants
by alanrkane
Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:33 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer -- COMING OF AGE STORY
Replies: 27
Views: 10882

Re: Be a Better Writer -- COMING OF AGE STORY

How about coming of age in a spiritual sense or psychological sense
by alanrkane
Fri Nov 21, 2014 6:17 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer -- COMING OF AGE STORY
Replies: 27
Views: 10882

Re: Be a Better Writer -- COMING OF AGE STORY

How about adulthood where MC has to go back and revisit and learn from her mistakes. Stuff that they need to do to become a fully rounded person. Thus coming of age as if stuff not dealt with they will remain in a childlike state
by alanrkane
Sat Nov 15, 2014 11:02 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer -- ACTION/ADVENTURE
Replies: 16
Views: 8967

Re: Be a Better Writer -- ACTION/ADVENTURE

I wrote mine on Thursday/Friday but your right it could make an interesting story. Might keep on back burner.also yes I should have used ( ; ) thanks Alan

Maybe I should find a proof reader
by alanrkane
Sat Nov 15, 2014 6:04 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer -- ACTION/ADVENTURE
Replies: 16
Views: 8967

Re: Be a Better Writer -- ACTION/ADVENTURE

Personally you'r nicer than I am.

Stella ..... toward the rapidly closing gate. with a click she knew the electronic seals initiated, baring escape from that direction. Panic, fear and bitterness she knew well. Why are they playing with me?
Leave! That was the last command given.
by alanrkane
Sat Nov 15, 2014 2:14 am
Forum: Writing Challenge - General Discussion
Topic: Important Reminder - Previously Written Material
Replies: 11
Views: 8148

Re: Important Reminder - Previously Written Material

So also checking if you start even a number of lines then decide not on topic and do a new entry. What can we do with these lines previously formulated? So can I still use the idea just re-jig it or does it go into a literary black hole?
by alanrkane
Sat Nov 08, 2014 4:37 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer -- TRAVELOGUE
Replies: 15
Views: 8188

Re: Be a Better Writer -- TRAVELOGUE

removed as giving to much info
by alanrkane
Thu Oct 30, 2014 12:46 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners FANTASY/SCI-FI GENRE Challenge
Replies: 7
Views: 2519

Re: Winners FANTASY/SCI-FI GENRE Challenge

Thanks for the help all in shaping my progress

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