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by rider
Sun Sep 28, 2014 9:58 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY
Replies: 50
Views: 30566

Re: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY

Thank you Jan for you feedback, especially seeing as I did not go through the homework steps, which I only discovered later. I see what you mean about the buckets-rug idea not working. I suppose it is a case of trying to create an image when it just is not there. Sometimes what is in our heads just ...
by rider
Sun Sep 28, 2014 12:16 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY
Replies: 50
Views: 30566

Re: Be a Better Writer--USING IMAGERY

Hi! I'm late to this, but have been pointed to it by someone in my challenge buddy group. I really need help with imagery. Here is a sentence I really struggled with from my last entry: 'From inside the shop a large, elderly, Greek man wearing a Greek fisherman's cap came towards me,walking between ...
by rider
Thu Apr 03, 2014 6:44 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's New Writing Lessons -- COMMONLY MISUSED WORDS
Replies: 66
Views: 45394

Re: Jan's New Writing Lessons -- COMMONLY MISUSED WORDS

Hi Jan, I have not been able to spend much time on your writing lessons, and now that I have the time I have been poring over as many as I can. They are so useful. Thanks for making this available. I have even been able to use some of your suggestions in this reply. This lesson on commonly misused w...

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