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by angelbuck3
Tue Jun 12, 2012 5:17 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 52
Views: 52197

Re: #17--A GREAT BEGINNING #2

Here it is edited...? She shivers against the cold on her skin; the sharpness of it stings the back of her throat with every breath. The snow is falling thicker, faster now, making it more difficult to see ahead. She wonders when the elders will decide to stop running, or if they will find shelter b...
by angelbuck3
Tue Jun 12, 2012 4:14 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 52
Views: 52197

Re: #17--A GREAT BEGINNING #2

Thank you so much!! Very encouraging! Actually I added in the age part to try and give more detail about the character... I didn't think I gave enough details initially after reading the "guidelines" to a good beginning. I should have stuck with my initial feeling.. :) Thank you so much for the poin...
by angelbuck3
Thu Jun 07, 2012 1:36 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings #2--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 52
Views: 52197

Re: #17--A GREAT BEGINNING #2

This is my very first post in this forum, I actually just found you all today :). Below will be the first two paragraphs of the book I am writing. It's my first attempt at any type of a book... so I'm going at this all blind. Hopefully, prayerfully, you can shine some light on it for me! Without fur...

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