Didn't want it to be too 'tumty tum' - not the sort of subject for that.
Can't remember what made me write it - just came to me, I think
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- Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:48 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--SLANT RHYME
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Joining this discussion a bit late... I wrote this a while ago. How'd I do? <b>Lament for Jerusalem</b> Twisted fragments of a sacred vessel Spoiled for service, wrecked to recognition; Fire-scorched symbol of a faithless vassal Seared of hope, of life, of God – this Nation. Oh Virgin daughter, tain...
- Thu Nov 29, 2007 9:18 pm
- Forum: Page Turner Writing Contest
- Topic: One More Sleep to Go!!!! (edited from One Month to Go)
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I was just saying to Stephen yesterday that I might ask you read it as a favour. It's set in exilic Babylon, and I'd really appreciate a Jewish check.