Search found 3 matches

by junglelife
Fri Jul 02, 2010 8:50 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings (#1)--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 104
Views: 90812

Here are some things to consider: By using the phrases "I think" and "at least it seems to be working for me", you're undermining your own sentence, making you seem less confident than you intend. And I strongly recommend against using exclamation points in a formal essay. They're best reserved for...
by junglelife
Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:24 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Beginnings (#1)--the 4th judging criterion
Replies: 104
Views: 90812

This is the opening line of an essay I was asked to write about hearing and responding to my call as a missionary:



I think I have finally learned the secret to doing God's will—at least it seems to be working for me!
by junglelife
Fri Jul 02, 2010 9:09 am
Forum: Best of the Best
Topic: Best of the Best Winners for 2010
Replies: 14
Views: 13215

What a wonderful and diverse group of writing!

A very impressive group of winners indeed! From gripping, to hysterical, to heart-wrenching, each has a different style, a unique message, and each conveys truths that go beyond the stories. And all of this without being 'preachy'

Congratulations!

Go to advanced search