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by Calenmiriel
Tue May 04, 2010 6:19 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #8--Developing Interesting Characters
Replies: 69
Views: 114631

Thanks for welcoming me! Thank you for the compliments on my writing. I try to portray each character through actions and words as you said. Reply to Pointer 1.) It was supposed to have a romantic air to it, though Charlotte and Lucius are just best friends. (At least in the scene I posted.) The sto...
by Calenmiriel
Tue May 04, 2010 10:49 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #8--Developing Interesting Characters
Replies: 69
Views: 114631

I've never submitted anything like this before, so here we go! This a scene from a short story I just finished writing on April 30th. ^^ (Sorry, it's a little over 150 words.) >_< She folder her hands in her lap, “What will we be having today, good sir?” questioned Charlotte with playful eyes. Each ...
by Calenmiriel
Tue May 04, 2010 10:29 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #8--Developing Interesting Characters
Replies: 69
Views: 114631

This is an excerpt from an OLD novel for teenagers I was working on some years ago. In this passage, my main goal is to give a quick introduction of Wanda. (Dan, the Pastor's son on the ladder, has already been introduced, so is already known to be pretty conservative and studious in speech and man...

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