Jan,
Yes, it is much better with the dashes.
Thank you!
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- Tue Jun 22, 2010 7:16 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Beginnings (#1)--the 4th judging criterion
- Replies: 104
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- Tue Jun 22, 2010 6:30 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Beginnings (#1)--the 4th judging criterion
- Replies: 104
- Views: 203502
- Tue Jun 08, 2010 7:33 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #14--THE WELL-CONSTRUCTED POEM
- Replies: 37
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- Wed May 26, 2010 7:36 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #13--The Well-Crafted Short Story
- Replies: 58
- Views: 95019
- Tue May 18, 2010 6:53 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #12--PREDICTABILITY
- Replies: 29
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Recognizable character types: The Old Fashioned Grandma- Bakes cookies, knits, but also rides in a motorcycle group every weekend. The Rough Motorcycle Guy- Long beard, heavily tatooed, but is also an aspiring poet. For the poetry: I am guilty of writing the same type of poetry. I am going to do thi...
- Mon May 10, 2010 2:33 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
- Replies: 74
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Homework #3 “Wait! Stop the car, Doris, stop the car.” “Land sakes alive, Frank, what are trying to do, make me wreck?” “I saw something in the grass, looked like a bracelet, maybe had some diamonds in it.” “Absolutely not, we’re already late for bingo. They’ll probably run out of cards.” “Doris, it...
- Mon May 10, 2010 7:50 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
- Replies: 74
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- Mon Apr 19, 2010 2:12 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
- Replies: 65
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Hi Jan, I have participated in the Challenge for a few weeks now. I usually think about it until at least Monday and pick the idea that feels right. I have my husband read it to see if it fits. I guess my question would be, is it possible to go too far out of the box and then be off topic? Something...