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- Tue Jan 26, 2010 1:11 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #2: Beware of Adjectives and Adverbs
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adverbs and adjectives
This is the second test I've taken in your series. I'm learning already. Thank you for giving us this oportunity to learn the basics. Knowing this is available helps me to realize I'm not alone in my shortcomings. I never did well in English classes in school. Sciences were my best courses. Now I ha...
- Mon Jan 25, 2010 11:38 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's New "Class"--Writing Basics
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Jan's Writing Basics
“Yellow leaves from the Alder trees drifted down and the vine maple had turned blood red. Elderberry bushes and ferns painted the river banks in green.” From: “A Mending at the Edge” by Jane Kirkpatrick I found three salsa words in this passage: Drifted – This word gives the feeling of a calm autumn...