thanks Jan. Yes its my own writing and please feel free to edit it.
will be waiting for the feedback.
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- Wed Jan 20, 2010 9:36 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's New "Class"--Writing Basics
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Hie. lm inspired by african writing and l just wrote this passage down for your comments and criticism Nothing could have prepared her for this mental toture. The load was becoming too heavy to carry, draining the little she had of the will to live. Poverty was gnawing at the root of her existance a...