Jan, at your leisure, may I also have copies of:
The Compiled Master Class
And
Your lessons on onomatopoeia
Thank you and very much looking forward to reading them!
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- Mon May 10, 2010 8:14 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #8--Developing Interesting Characters
- Replies: 69
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- Mon May 10, 2010 3:50 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
- Replies: 74
- Views: 143354
Okay…totally see the flaw in starting three paragraphs with action…redundant? Need to mix up? Went through looking at commas you removed and I see why. I am beginning to think I do this because it is the way I talk in person. Very animated and I take a breath for emphasis (smile) but realize I didn’...
- Mon May 10, 2010 1:04 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #11--Creative, Unique, Fresh
- Replies: 74
- Views: 143354
Lesson #1 Feeding my pets is such a boring everyday task, but if I want them to live, I have to feed them every day. (this is my attempt at a little humor) Lesson #2 Although I’m a huge humor advocate, also like using suspense and fantasy in my stories. (You said one, so hope two is all right) Les...
- Mon May 10, 2010 11:32 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
- Replies: 65
- Views: 194424
- Mon May 10, 2010 11:11 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
- Replies: 65
- Views: 194424
- Sun May 09, 2010 12:37 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Writing Basics #9--Writing on Topic
- Replies: 65
- Views: 194424
- Sun Mar 28, 2010 11:40 am
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Semicolons, Colons, and Dashes - Explanations Added
- Replies: 27
- Views: 51273
- Wed Mar 17, 2010 12:30 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Nominative / Objective Case
- Replies: 3
- Views: 12433
Hi Ann, I ALWAYS get confused with using I or me. Sometimes, rarely...it sounds ok using both. BUT, that being said, I think I've got it. I came up with a mental reminder for using I or me. MOP=move other person.....out of sentence and see which one sounds correct. I do like your easy reminders for ...
- Fri Mar 12, 2010 11:55 am
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37668
Hello Miss Carol! Yes, I also, don't get all the notifications when someone has posted, so I do what Ann suggested, cruise the forums I like. However, it is a bummer sometimes, because I get busy and forget some of the ones I want to follow. HOWEVER, it is a good exercise in keeping my brain polished!
- Thu Mar 11, 2010 2:55 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37668
Okay, I scrammbled right on over to Comas, part II and found the interjections....thank you. I need to take the time to review! As for the half century mark, I'll be a mere 56 soon :) btw...when the challenge is over each week, I go back to the articles I really like to see who the author is. As you...
- Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:03 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37668
Thank you Ann, Okay, I think I've got it. I went back and fourth with all of the corrections you made, except the coma after Oh. I didn't and wouldn't have put it in, so don't understand the reason behind it....(little pun there) :) AND didn't catch forgot. :) And pretty sure I am not younger than ...
- Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:18 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37668
Oh, good, you're only an hour ahead. My phone, under world time, said 4 hours :oops: “Oh wait , I’m sorry, I forget to mention that I just downloaded the Norton Anti-virus software through Comcast if that helps.” I interjected. Smiling , Kyle replied, “Oh yes, that makes a huge difference and may be...
- Thu Mar 11, 2010 11:18 am
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37668
- Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:05 pm
- Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
- Topic: Commas (Part Five - The End)
- Replies: 24
- Views: 37668
Thank you kindly Ann. Glad to see you back! Glad to see Kyle, I told him, “I need your help with my computer if you aren’t too busy.” “Let me ask you a few questions before I take a look,” Kyle said. “Oh wait I’m sorry, I forget to mention that I just downloaded the Norton Anti-virus software throug...
- Wed Mar 10, 2010 2:04 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
- Views: 132892