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by Cajunluvie
Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:49 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for ETERNITY
Replies: 9
Views: 5429

Re: Winners for ETERNITY

Congrats!
by Cajunluvie
Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:56 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for CENTURIES
Replies: 17
Views: 8488

Re: Winners for CENTURIES

Congrats to everyone!!

I peeked and saw 9th place. Wowzer! That's good to me! :thumbs
by Cajunluvie
Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:51 pm
Forum: The Water Cooler
Topic: The New New Who's Who List
Replies: 56
Views: 45009

Re: The New New Who's Who List

Cajunluvie for Rachel Dorsey
by Cajunluvie
Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:30 pm
Forum: Christian Writers' Groups
Topic: Florida? Alabama? Georgia? Louisiana?
Replies: 7
Views: 8330

Re: Florida? Alabama? Georgia? Louisiana?

I used to live in Fl for years. Gainesville and Micanopy.

I just moved back to my hometown in Louisiana in June '09.

So.... this could be a South-East group? :coolsign
by Cajunluvie
Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:14 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Once in a Blue Moon Bonus Prize Winner
Replies: 17
Views: 8134

Congrats, Mariane!!
by Cajunluvie
Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:09 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Winners for THE MEDIA
Replies: 10
Views: 4715

Wow!

Congrats to everyone who got EC's. That's awesome!

I was rather shocked to see my poem for the 1st place in Level Champion for Beginners Category. That's neat!
by Cajunluvie
Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:42 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
Replies: 94
Views: 63600

No-No list 1. Someone's house burning accidentally or an arson incident that is being investigated. 2. A car engine catching fire while driving 3. Heating up food or cooking, baking in the kitchen where a fire breaks out 4. Campfire meetings in the woods with the Girl or Boy scouts or at summer camp...
by Cajunluvie
Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:01 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 42535

Yes, Cajunluvie--except that your first tow paragraphs are both Cathie's, and could be combined. I went through my previous entries to see if I could find one with a dialogue between a husband and wife that'd be somewhat equivalent to this. Try this silly story and see if that makes more sense. Kee...
by Cajunluvie
Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:25 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 42535

Yeah, I see what you're saying. I liked your rewrite of the beginning with Cathie much better than mine. :D Let me rewrite this again to see if I've got this right this time around. She reached across the sofa arm and pulled out a book, The Five Love Languages and waved it in front of his face. "Doe...
by Cajunluvie
Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:08 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 42535

Well, I'll give it a try.... Adrian Beecher smiled at his wife of twenty years. Sliding his arm around her shoulders he remarked, "Cathie, have I mentioned how beautiful you are, lately?" He heard her giggle and saw her head shake a little. "Silly you. You just told me that an hour ago. What's all t...
by Cajunluvie
Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:23 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #3
Replies: 54
Views: 42535

Carol,

I thought that was a cute start!
by Cajunluvie
Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:19 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 57903

Thanks, Jan. Yup, that was what I wanted to know.
by Cajunluvie
Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:57 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 57903

Re: Dialog Trouble

“Help! I’m soooo lost, and I can’t find ‘said’ anywhere. Please help me.” “Oh my, you are a sad case for lost and found. I did say to try to move the ‘good stuff’ into the dialog. Maybe I should clarify, ‘said’ is rather bland, not really good stuff, so put it back,” said Jan. “No, no, I can’t. I c...
by Cajunluvie
Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:56 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 57903

Cajunluvie, this is definitely over 100 words! Have mercy! You've really skipped into next week's lesson on tagless dialog--which is absolutely fine. So the only thing I'll do is to correct in red a few punctuation/capitalization errors. You're an over-achiever! "You kidding me?" Rose scoffed at he...
by Cajunluvie
Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:14 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Dialog #2
Replies: 52
Views: 57903

"You kidding me?" Rose scoffed at her husband, Tim. "She's coming here? Here? Of all places she could have gone, she picks our house?" "Ma wanted to see the kids. So, I told her she could. No harm done." Tim replied. Rose rolled her eyes and turned her face away from him. "Sure, just the kids." she ...

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