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by colin_nielsen
Fri Dec 31, 2010 5:06 pm
Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
Topic: Where is the highest ranking for communication breakdown?
Replies: 4
Views: 1824

Where is the highest ranking for communication breakdown?

Is it moved to somewhere else or just been forgotten?
by colin_nielsen
Mon Oct 26, 2009 8:14 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan"s Poetry Class--CLERIHEW
Replies: 62
Views: 37572

Okay: how about this one then. This one's for our good ole prime minister Kevin Rudd. Here's a bit of backstory: he had a hissy fit because the air force plane he was flying didn't have the kind of food he wanted. He ended up threatening a stewardess and reducing her to tears. Good ole Kevin Became ...
by colin_nielsen
Mon Oct 26, 2009 5:02 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan"s Poetry Class--CLERIHEW
Replies: 62
Views: 37572

Here is one about my daughter.

Courtney Paige
used to get into such a rage
but eventually she learned to turn her frown
upside down

Quite silly, I know.
by colin_nielsen
Sun Oct 18, 2009 2:24 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
Replies: 110
Views: 53245

lol the metaphor wasn't as clear as my other one. Tough to do with such a low word count.
It was supposed to be written from the POV of a Japanese man who has lost his daughter in the atomic blasts that ended world war two.
by colin_nielsen
Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:15 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Poetry Class: Haiku
Replies: 110
Views: 53245

I've never done one of these before, so I probably will not do as well as others. Ten point for anyone who can guess what it means.

Oh Precious Daughter
evil wind took you away
from me forever.
by colin_nielsen
Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:03 am
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--Quatrain
Replies: 55
Views: 36266

Gerald. That was excellent. I loved reading it.
by colin_nielsen
Tue Oct 13, 2009 10:05 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's Master Class--Quatrain
Replies: 55
Views: 36266

My first go.

The Serpent hides behind The Rock his fangs he does extend to quickly strike a sleeping flock so innocence will end. Point is that Satan, who is the serpent, is ultimately behind any instance and cover-up of child abuse that happens within the church. I know, pretty heavy. Not as fluffy as some. Rhy...
by colin_nielsen
Sun Aug 16, 2009 5:44 am
Forum: New to the FaithWriters Platinum (500)
Topic: Hello
Replies: 3
Views: 1981

Hello

I joined this site on Friday. Took me till Sunday to realise I wanted to support this site on a month to month basis.
I love this place. I'm sure there are heaps of things here I still need to learn to get the most out of this place. :D

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