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by ebrightken
Mon Jan 13, 2014 9:56 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--Devotionals
Replies: 84
Views: 59790

Re: Be a Better Writer--Devotionals

One thing I like about is devotional forum that was said is about using dialog. One of the most popular devotional s I Our Daily Bread. They have never used dialog. It would be interesting if they ever had a devotional that had dialog.
by ebrightken
Tue Nov 12, 2013 9:03 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TRANSITIONS
Replies: 27
Views: 21468

Re: Jan's New Writing Lessons--TRANSITIONS

What do you think of the transitions in the following story especially the last two paragraphs? How could have I done it better? " Change your life now!" That's basically what the Lord does through circumstances that are all too real for us. The Lord used a circumstance to scare me into quitting my...
by ebrightken
Mon Oct 14, 2013 8:24 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Be a Better Writer--SIMPLE SENTENCES
Replies: 40
Views: 23120

Re: Be a Better Writer--SIMPLE SENTENCES

Jan:
What is a difference or is there a difference between a simple sentence and a non simple sentence? Using two sentences could you dhow me the difference?
by ebrightken
Tue Jun 08, 2010 8:06 pm
Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
Topic: Tense's
Replies: 1
Views: 2194

Tense's

When I write my challenge story most of time my stories are past tense. To spite it is past tense is it ok in the dialog to be present tense because I am writing actually what someone’s says?
by ebrightken
Tue May 04, 2010 8:09 am
Forum: Ann's Grammar Basics
Topic: Commas (Part One)
Replies: 20
Views: 16713

comma's

It would be nice to have a lesson on other times when you should use a comma as it relates to a conjunction

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