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Dave Wagner03/01/04
And then he passed out from the pain of his grievous injuries? He seems to be pretty coherent for a man that had part of his scalp cleaved off.

I appreciate your efforts, they are pretty solidly actualized. I enjoy seeing writing like this, that hits familiar stories from unexpected angles. It's a solid, creative piece. A bit corny in places, but hey, that's no biggie. I enjoyed reading it, though it doesn't really elaborate at all on what becoming a disciple means, or would mean to this character.

Good post.
L.M. Lee03/02/04
felt like I was in the boat.
Robert Coskrey03/02/04
I am no authority on short stories. I liked
this story. Very Interesting.
Christine Rhee03/04/04
I thought your descriptions, especially at the beginning, were excellent!
Mary C Legg03/05/04
I apologize for other's unpleasant comments.
Linda Germain 03/06/04
A picture really IS worth a thousand words. It behooves us to remember how often we witness by what we do, not what we say. Good job.
Kenny Paul Clarkson03/07/04
I love the way you begin this story - you GRAB the reader's attention. Many writers fail in this point. Good job, my friend!