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Topic: Betrayal (02/16/04)

TITLE: The Bottomless Pit
By Bonnie Levesque
02/22/04

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Heaviness hangs on the soul of the betrayer.
Flies mass on its' selfishness.
Lurking on the deadened parts of his heart are pride,envy, and jealousy.
Depravity claws at his soul.
And, evil bile spews forth desperate blackness and deceit.

James 4:2..."Yet you do not have because you do not ask."

The embattled soul sinks in agony.
Drowning.
Each rivoting deathblow
Of evil, of division.
Degrading, defeating.

James 3:14 "But if you have bitter envy and self-seeking in your hearts, do not boast and lie against the truth.
James 3:16"For where envy and self-seeking exist, confusion and every evil thing are there.

The stench of debauchery
Worming its' way through the decaying caverns
Of the decomposed heart of the betrayer.
Defeated. Dejected.
Fallen into the blackness of death.

Matthew 7:13 "Enter by the narrow gate, for wide is the gate and broad is the way that leads to destruction, and there are many who go by it.
Matthew 7:14"Because narrow is the gate and difficult is the way which leads to life, and there are few who find it."


Member Comments
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Donna Anderson02/23/04
OH my, DON'T want to go THERE! Great writing!
Dave Wagner02/24/04
I see you working. Interesting approach. Makes me want to kill the lights, light a candle, play a dirge on an organ, and read it again. lol

Nice feel.
L.M. Lee02/26/04
nice weaving with scripture and poetry.