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:) Thanks for starting my day with a smile! Very clever. :)
I just loved this heart-warming little article with its surprising twist!
Heh. I was about to comment how 'off-their-rockers' the previous commenters were, until I re-read the last paragraph and it clicked that Maggie was a dog, not a person...lol. I re-read the whole piece again, and it is very clever. Good work.
Sarah Balk Bond
Great job! At first I was all mad that he viewed Maggie as a dog! Thanks for not writing the typical.
Cute story, has the makings of a good chilrens's book.
I would rewrite the sentence in the last paragraph "but when she..." it does not seem to flow as well as the rest of the story.
Also re-check for punctuation, I think you are in need of some quotation marks.
had me all the way to the end! Great article! :-)
Great writing Brad, you had me thinking Maggie was a person! I agree with one of the other faithwriters, this makes a great children's story. God bless you.
Sorry, I had Brad on the brain. Great writing Glen!!!
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