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Donna Anderson02/23/04
:) Thanks for starting my day with a smile! Very clever. :)
Glenda Lagerstedt02/23/04
I just loved this heart-warming little article with its surprising twist!
Dave Wagner02/23/04
Heh. I was about to comment how 'off-their-rockers' the previous commenters were, until I re-read the last paragraph and it clicked that Maggie was a dog, not a person...lol. I re-read the whole piece again, and it is very clever. Good work.
Sarah Balk Bond02/23/04
Great job! At first I was all mad that he viewed Maggie as a dog! Thanks for not writing the typical.
Margaret Reed02/26/04
Margaret Reed02/26/04
Cute story, has the makings of a good chilrens's book.

I would rewrite the sentence in the last paragraph "but when she..." it does not seem to flow as well as the rest of the story.

Also re-check for punctuation, I think you are in need of some quotation marks.
L.M. Lee02/26/04
had me all the way to the end! Great article! :-)
Jacqueline Odom-Bullock02/27/04
Great writing Brad, you had me thinking Maggie was a person! I agree with one of the other faithwriters, this makes a great children's story. God bless you.
Jacqueline Odom-Bullock02/27/04
Sorry, I had Brad on the brain. Great writing Glen!!!