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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: My Beautiful Memory
By george elerick
12/12/04

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a memory or real to me
a taste of dreams
or just
plain ol' reality

could we walk the road awhile
and play with our tears
remember the time we loved
that has been rewritten throughout
these years

could i wake in the wake of your beauty
could you look at me and see right through me
could we press our lips and forget the loss
and never wake up to bear our cross

this romance, this memory
has left me with you by my side
a sordid ecstasy
a broken paradise
and a running river escape

would you be me escape
my beautiful memory


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Norma OGrady12/13/04
Our memories no one can erase..
Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005"
lovingly Norma
Jodi Hodge12/15/04
Very romantic. Very well written. Great job.
Debbie OConnor12/16/04
Well done. Some great imagery. This is my favorite part -- could i wake in the wake of your beauty
could you look at me and see right through me
could we press our lips and forget the loss
and never wake up to bear our cross

Love it!
Mitzi Busby12/16/04
I enjoyed your style. I'm thankful for memories to have and memories to make.
MILENA ASSENOVA12/17/04
I LIKED YOUR POEM, GREAT STYLE. MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! GOD BLESS
Joyce Poet12/19/04
Far too sweet to be so bittersweet. Lovely. Thank you for blessing us with it!