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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY how it works   Previous Challenge Entry Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04) TITLE: Gentle Whisper By Rebekah Bentley 12/12/04  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND A look A smile A touch A word The gentle whisper that my heart heard My friend My lover My husband His wife Hand-in-hand we start a new life New house New city New friends New son The children keep coming one-by-one A spat A quarrel A duel A fight We kiss and make up by the end of the night Happiness Sorrows Laughter Tears Still deeply in love after all of these years We're old We're wrinkled (He's bald) I'm gray We still have each other to hold onto each day A smile A touch A word A tear The gentle whisper my heart can still hear PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE Member Comments Member Date Karri Compton 12/13/04 This made me smile! How lovely! God bless, Karri Norma OGrady 12/13/04 Gentle Whispers are worth their weight in gold! Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005" lovingly Norma David Stewart 12/14/04 Very nice! This is heart warming. Merry Christmas. Deborah Anderson 12/14/04 Good job, Rebekah. I really enjoyed this. God bless you. Jodi Hodge 12/15/04 Great poem. Exactly the way God expects our marriages to be. Way to go! Debbie OConnor 12/15/04 Beautiful! Nice form, well written. Loved it. Tesiri Moweta 12/16/04 Fantastic! That's the beauty of life and love. Keep winning and shining for Jesus. Mitzi Busby 12/16/04 Becca, Thankful my heart can still hear. God Bless. Seems you have a jewel. Rebekah Bentley 12/16/04 Actually, I'm only 20 and still single. This is what I'm praying for. :) MILENA ASSENOVA 12/17/04 I LIKED YOUR POEM AND THE STYLE YOU HAVE. MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! GOD BLESS Joyce Poet 12/19/04 Beautiful! Sounds like those elderly couples who sit out on their porch swings holding hands... even after that 50th anniversary. You know... those couples that I try so hard not to envy. :::wink::: Seriously though, it puts a sweet flutter in my heart at the thought that could be me someday.

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