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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: What You Do For Me
By Jodi Hodge
12/10/04

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Your name I quietly whisper,
Upon the highest cloud.

Your hand I gently reach for,
To guide me all around.

Your face, so like an angel,
Smiles lovingly back into mine.

Your eyes warmly caress me,
Making feelings of peaceful sublime.

Your song calmly nurtures me,
Telling me that you care.

Your arms softly surround me,
I know you’ll always be there.

Jodi R. Hodge


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Joanne Malley12/13/04
Oooh, so sweet! Joanne
Norma OGrady12/13/04
well done
clapping my hands!!!
Yeshua's blessing be with you this Christmas season and have a HAPPY NEW YEAR! 2005
lovingly
Norma
WENDY DECKER12/13/04
Jodi, very sweet poem. Too bad you couldn't have made it longer. Try to keep within the word count (150 min) to be considered for editor's choice.
Tesiri Moweta12/14/04
Very nice poem. Can you take a second shot at it by making it a bit longer? It would be awesome. You have a great blend of creativity and choice words. Thank you for sharing.
Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
Karissa Rouzaud12/14/04
I love your poem! The words flow together perfectly!
Lois Jennison Tribble12/15/04
This is such a sweet poem, expressing the perfect trust and peace of a child. Much said in very few words. Good job, Jodi.
Mitzi Busby12/15/04
I really liked your poem. Thanks for sharing it.
David Stewart12/15/04
Jodi, very nice poem! I really enjoyed readin it.
Wendy, it may have slipped your mind but there was no minimum word count for this challenge.

Merry Christmas!
David Stewart12/15/04
Jodi, Great Poem. Simple and beautiful. So this is how it's done? Merry Christmas!!
MILENA ASSENOVA12/16/04
WOW! I REALLY LOVED IT.
MERRY XMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR! GOD BLESS