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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: Love is God within us
By MILENA ASSENOVA
12/10/04

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The love is true
Between me and you
How can it be so soon?
Fell like Iím on the moon
Blessed to have you
ĎCoz you love me more than I love me
Iím your number one concern
The supreme romance of all
The love you give to all
The mercy and glory
The power and your story
The essence of your heart
Passes upon our spirit
Gift that cannot be justified or analysed


The Perfect Love
ďMr RightĒ Iíve been looking for
Romance Iíve never felt before
Wrote a book for us to know
Unique dedication
Deep love
The Living Word
Precious and moving
Powerful weapon
Soul food to my soul
Yet most significant, influential
The mighty Word of God
A gem to keep in every pocket
Take out and read
Let you heart be filled
Knowledge, insight that we need
Unknown to scholars, teachers of this human race


God is the author and the creator of life
Romancing us
This relationship is timeless history
Communicating our destiny
His words are poetry
Iíve never known
Love that overflows
Genuine passion


God is my soul mate
No questions or doubts about it
There is no other like the Father
A true commitment, devotion
A pledge forever made
How a relationship should be
Just like the rainbow in the sky
The sign from God
The covenant to Noah and all life
That he would never flood
His creation and the earth again
Genesis 9:8-18


We sinned, rebelled
We got dirty, ungrateful
He still kept it faithful
We had a breakthrough
We were saved once Jesus came
Died on the Calvary
Thus we have the opportunity
To enter the heavens
The great kingdom prepared
For the well being of the human being
The City of God
How kind of him
When we just forget him
Weíre unworthy of him


Got to get righteous
Be thankful to the Lord
One day we can be at the gates
To the City of God
Eternally be
In the physical presence of the Lord


Money canít buy his love
The love is free but only
Seeking it with purity
It would shower me
It could never be sold
It will never be cold
The step we take has to be bold
Patiently we got to hold
This cannot equate to anything else
The Greatest Love Story ever told
Between God and man


Member Comments
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Norma OGrady12/13/04
It is the greatest love story...
Yeshua's blessing be with you this Christmas season and have a HAPPY NEW YEAR! 2005
lovingly
Norma
David Stewart12/15/04
very creative. Nice poem. Merry Christmas.
Mitzi Busby12/15/04
I like your approach and you have a beautiful name. God bless and keep up the writing.
William Mae12/16/04
thanks for leaving the comment on my poem "Lasting Love." I to enjoyed your poem, God is our first and true love. Have a happy holiday season, and thanks.

william mae
Lois Jennison Tribble12/16/04
Wonderful message, Milena. "Love is God Within Us" -- Jesus alone can fill the God-shaped vacuum in our souls, and without Him no true love exists. You have a passionate, bold, direct style -- keep writing. I enjoyed your poem.
Joyce Poet12/19/04
Sister, the change in writing styles only makes it that much more interesting, almost forcing the reader's attention -- The concept is different, but very creative. The same concept doesn't work very well when it's used to switch between slang and proper speech however. (The transition was tough.) The message, as a whole, is perfect! I feel... well... filled. A very nice drink for those who thirst!