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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: It's gonna be a good day!
By Melanie Valencian0
12/09/04

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words just came
dancing.
free style, full of emotions
in accord with the trembling
of legs.
a sigh,
i pause then find the comfort,
still i am in limbo
light please
and steps i hear
were in rhyme
in order of the sun
the giver
slowly, i regain the strength
the equilibrium is still hunting
me
i resist though.
and my own war is against
the dark.
empty i may seem to be
but here in my heart
hope, courange, perseverance
are starting to continue
the count and the bloom...
it's gonna be a good day!


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Norma OGrady12/13/04
Love makes every day a good day...
Yeshua's blessing be with you this Christmas season and have a HAPPY NEW YEAR! 2005
lovingly
Norma
Tesiri Moweta12/14/04
Very creative. Thanks for sharing! Keep winning and shining or Jesus.
MILENA ASSENOVA12/16/04
I AGREE IT IS CREATIVE AND DESCRIPTIVE. GREAT JOB. MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! GOD BLESS
Mitzi Busby12/16/04
Very creative. Blessings!