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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: My Romance
By Wayne Thomson
12/08/04

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I'm waiting for my romance to begin
But not until the right girl comes along
One with than certain kind of look in the corner of her eye
I wait for my fantasy girl
So I can make a difference in the life of jusr one girl
In high school, I thought it was April
In college, I thought it was Rose
But no, neither wanted to date me
And now there's Yari
A woman I must persue
For she is kind, caring, hard-working,
Intelligent, determined, and beautifu
Plus she loves the Lord
What a blessing her friendship has been!
I must persue a relationship with her
I want to be her boyfriend
I want her to be my girlfriend
Simply because, I believe
There is a strong chance it could become more
But first, I must overcome a hurdle
Which is her boyfriend
I don't know if it's wrong or right?
But my heart tells me to go for the gold
Despite the risk

I want for my fantasy girl
Here's hoping its you
So a beautiul romance can begin


Member Comments
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Norma OGrady12/13/04
very nice poem...
Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005"
lovingly Norma
Tesiri Moweta12/14/04
Well Wayne, you can be sure the Lord will bring your fantasy girl into reality as long as you stay hooked on to Him for good.
Nice poem! Keep winning and shining for Jesus.
MILENA ASSENOVA12/16/04
I ENJOYED YOUR POEM, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! GOD BLESS
Phyllis Inniss 12/17/04
God works in miraculous ways. If He thinks she's right for you, you'll get her if you pray sincerely. Have a blessed Xmas and a Happy New Year.