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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: Stalker -- Romancing the Stone
By Al Boyce
12/08/04

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Stalker

In my dream I walked
Through wreaths of fog
Toward a flashing light of red
And as I drew close
I saw the words
You've a "Message" it said.

Somehow I knew
Before listening
What message I would hear
But I pushed "play"
And as fog dispersed
The message became clear.

"Beloved," it said
"Please come to me
"You know your heart is mine
"Cast off your loves
"They can't complete"
Then static on the line.

In panic then
I quickly dressed
And ran out to my car
Only to find
An envelope
I knew it from afar.

In letters cut
From magazines
My name was on its front
Inside a card
"Beloved," it said
"You know I'm all you want."

"Stalker!" I hissed
My panic built
Should I call police?
Who could it be
Someone I knew?
I prayed, please give me peace

And I awoke
Alone in bed
To a ringing telephone
Relieved I groped
To pick it up
And heard, "You're all alone."

This can't be
I thought in fear
I left that all behind
The stalker's just
A figment of
My active, dreaming mind

But bit by bit
Awareness came
I checked my caller log
And at the end
I caught my breath
The last call came from God.

No stalker this
I thought at once
But the lover of my soul
And doubt crept in
As I thought of how
I'd kept the Lord on hold.

But other lovers?
What on earth
Did that message mean?
But I looked around
At house and car
At all things bought with green

Where does He rank?
I slowly thought
In this, my busy life
In double digits
Way down my list
The thought cut like a knife

I ignore His letters
Signed with blood
Content to stay alone
Denying Him
His fine attempts
To romance this heart of stone

Yet still He calls
Leaves messages
My "stalker" from on high
Hoping, with love
I will repent
And one day
To Him
Fly


Member Comments
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Norma OGrady12/13/04
long poem..enjoyed reading
Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005"
lovingly Norma
Karri Compton12/13/04
Very heavy thoughts - I'll need more time to process this, if I have the courage. Great job. Blessings,
Karri
Shelly Robinson12/13/04
I loved this piece! Very creative and thought provoking. I enjoyed it from beginning to end.
Debbie OConnor12/13/04
Excellent job! I wonder if God has ever been called a "stalker" before? I really loved this poem and got the message loud and clear.
Jodi Hodge12/13/04
Great job. Intense, thought-provoking, like a good thriller. I enjoyed this very much.
Casey Overbeek12/14/04
You've reminded me of a verse from Rev 3:20
Behold I stand at the door and knock. If anyone open up, I will come in and sup (have dinner or fellowship) with him
Deborah Anderson12/14/04
This held my interest from beginning to end. God bless you.
Joyce Poet12/14/04
Wow, Al! That was a wonderful, powerful read! I am so, so, so glad that He took my heart of stone and gave me a heart of flesh... that He gave me an opportunity to come to my First Love, my True Love and leave "all those other lovers" (idols that don't speak or have the power to save) behind.
Phyllis Inniss 12/15/04
Al, this is awesome. I enjoyed this poem very much. Did you mean "complete" or "compete". It doesn't, however, take away from the strength and beauty of the poem.
Lois Jennison Tribble12/15/04
Wonderful, Al. Rich with both humor and horror, disturbing in a very healthy way. A strange mix for a romance topic -- very creative and very well done!
David Stewart12/15/04
Wow! Mystery, romance and a twist! I was really caught up in this. I'm glad I got to read this one! Merry Christmas.
MILENA ASSENOVA12/16/04
A GREAT POEM. IT'S A BLESSING TO READ.
MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR! GOD BLESS
Delores McCarter12/17/04
The poem grabbed me and held me to the end, however, I must admit, I never considered my Heavenly Father to be: My "stalker" from on high....Very creative!
Linda Germain 12/18/04
Very well said, Al. I like the way you think in such a creative way!
~LG~


   
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