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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: Forever Love
By mary wolf
12/07/04

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A touch so gentle, a look so tenderly given.
To know the love that hides within A heart so pure,
Is comparable only to the giver.

One has said that true beauty comes from within
You my love, are more portrait than I can look upon.
Yet, my eyes never want to leave your face.

Our hands touch, my heart races.
How I long to embrace this moment perpetually .
A thousand words are spoken, yet no sound is made.
Our spirits soar, our thoughts are one.

Time is a fantasy, for we loose all track of continuance.
An hour , a day, a month, a year.
All are but a fleeting moment.

The time I spend with you seems to go on forever
For the moment you enter my presence, life stands still.
We breathe as one. United we are one being.

Your penetrating devotion leaves nothing
To be desired and your companionship
Fulfills the thirst within me.


Hearing you laughter lightens my spirit,
To an apex known by few.
Come fly with me upon the mountain.

Run through the meadow of promises
Into the world of life long covenant
That we may share, forever our love.

A temporal world can not hold us.
For this kind of love will go beyond the bounds.
To be eternal, even in another world.


Member Comments
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Norma OGrady12/13/04
Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005"
lovingly Norma
Phyllis Inniss 12/13/04
This poem sounds almost like one of the Songs of Solomon, both spiritual and nostalgic. Have a lovely Xmas and a Happy New Year. Phyllis
Jodi Hodge12/13/04
Very well written. Romantic and passionate. This is one of my favorites so far. Great descriptive words. Good job!
Delores McCarter12/14/04
The words in this wonderful poem was very picturesque. I loved it!
Joyce Poet12/14/04
Beautiful, Mary. This "Forever Love" that you've written about is EXACTLY what my heart desires. Thank you so much for sharing not only your talent and something so personal as your blessed relationship with us, but a part of your heart that is very obviously precious to the Lord.
Debbie OConnor12/15/04
This is a beauty. This is my favorite stanza -- One has said that true beauty comes from within
You my love, are more portrait than I can look upon. Yet, my eyes never want to leave your face.

Just breathtaking. Great work!
Mitzi Busby12/15/04
Mary, This is really terrific. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing it.
MILENA ASSENOVA12/16/04
VERY INSPIRING AND REFLECTING OF GOD'S LOVE ON YOU AND VICE VERSA
MERRY XMAS AND HAPPY NEW YEAR!
GOD BLESS
Robert Drury12/18/04
Well written and spiritually suggestive.