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Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04)

TITLE: Two
By David Stewart
12/07/04

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She smiles at him
His legs grow weak.

He smiles back blushing
She swears she can hear her own heartbeat.

He looks in her eyes and he can see forever.
As she walks closer he has to remind himself to breathe.

He takes her in his arms
and she's electrified.

He smells her hair and knows there is a God
She's so excited she tries not to giggle, laugh or cry.

Their hearts beat silently together
and now the two have become
one flesh.


Member Comments
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Norma OGrady12/13/04
Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005"
lovingly Norma
Tesiri Moweta12/13/04
Wow! hot and sizzling romance! Great poem! Really loved it!
Keep winning and shining for Jesus!
Phyllis Inniss 12/13/04
Short and sweet. And the two became one. Have a great Xmas and a Happy New Year. Phyllis.
David Stewart12/13/04
My hope was to evoke feelings of romance in as few words as I could. I'm no poet. But i gave it a try.
Debbie OConnor12/13/04
Great job. Short, but what a punch. I liked it a lot.
Jodi Hodge12/13/04
Passion and fire! I enjoyed it and think you did a great job.
Karissa Rouzaud12/14/04
This is beautiful!!!
Delores McCarter12/14/04
Cute! I hope you send this in a card next February to your Valentine, if you haven't done so already.
Kudos to you! What a talent! Good job!
Deborah Anderson12/14/04
I thought you did a good job, David. God bless you.
Joyce Poet12/14/04
I really, really appreciate that someone had the guts to write something so electric here. When you're waiting for that mate that you know God's got for you, there's not a thing wrong with wanting that relationship to be with one that you can make weak in the knees... and vice versa. It's icing on the cake... an extra dose of blessing from God.
Mitzi Busby12/15/04
David,
Really nice work. Thank you for sharing.
Robert Drury12/15/04
Delishiously direct. Great job!
Robert Drury12/15/04
Ah, my friend, there are no accidents! :-).
thank you so much for reviewing my poem, "Cemetery Romance" and for you kind words and encouragement
Linda Germain 12/15/04
David, make sure the line of ladies forms to the right and doesn't cause a traffic jam! Very dear poem. I pray the Lord sends this exact woman to you...maybe by UPS! Blessings new FW Brother.
~LG~ :0)
MILENA ASSENOVA12/16/04
i adore this. that is how romance and love should be a blessing given from God.
merry christmas and happy new year!
God Bless
Joanne Malley12/16/04
David,
Seems to me you have the makings of a very romantic guy! And, great first shot at your "electrifying" poem!
Blessings. Jo
Linda Germain 12/17/04
Hey DS, A lady left a message for YOU on the bottom of MY poem... thought you might want another drop or two of encouragement! :0)
~KS~