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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY how it works   Previous Challenge Entry Topic: POETRY CHALLENGE - Romance (12/06/04) TITLE: Two By David Stewart 12/07/04  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND She smiles at him His legs grow weak. He smiles back blushing She swears she can hear her own heartbeat. He looks in her eyes and he can see forever. As she walks closer he has to remind himself to breathe. He takes her in his arms and she's electrified. He smells her hair and knows there is a God She's so excited she tries not to giggle, laugh or cry. Their hearts beat silently together and now the two have become one flesh. PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE Member Comments Member Date Norma OGrady 12/13/04 Yeshua bless you through this christmas season and have a "HAPPY NEW YEAR 2005" lovingly Norma Tesiri Moweta 12/13/04 Wow! hot and sizzling romance! Great poem! Really loved it! Keep winning and shining for Jesus! Phyllis Inniss  12/13/04 Short and sweet. And the two became one. Have a great Xmas and a Happy New Year. Phyllis. David Stewart 12/13/04 My hope was to evoke feelings of romance in as few words as I could. I'm no poet. But i gave it a try. Debbie OConnor 12/13/04 Great job. Short, but what a punch. I liked it a lot. Jodi Hodge 12/13/04 Passion and fire! I enjoyed it and think you did a great job. Karissa Rouzaud 12/14/04 This is beautiful!!! Delores McCarter 12/14/04 Cute! I hope you send this in a card next February to your Valentine, if you haven't done so already. Kudos to you! What a talent! Good job! Deborah Anderson 12/14/04 I thought you did a good job, David. God bless you. Joyce Poet 12/14/04 I really, really appreciate that someone had the guts to write something so electric here. When you're waiting for that mate that you know God's got for you, there's not a thing wrong with wanting that relationship to be with one that you can make weak in the knees... and vice versa. It's icing on the cake... an extra dose of blessing from God. Mitzi Busby 12/15/04 David, Really nice work. Thank you for sharing. Robert Drury 12/15/04 Delishiously direct. Great job! Robert Drury 12/15/04 Ah, my friend, there are no accidents! :-). thank you so much for reviewing my poem, "Cemetery Romance" and for you kind words and encouragement Linda Germain  12/15/04 David, make sure the line of ladies forms to the right and doesn't cause a traffic jam! Very dear poem. I pray the Lord sends this exact woman to you...maybe by UPS! Blessings new FW Brother. ~LG~ :0) MILENA ASSENOVA 12/16/04 i adore this. that is how romance and love should be a blessing given from God. merry christmas and happy new year! God Bless Joanne Malley 12/16/04 David, Seems to me you have the makings of a very romantic guy! And, great first shot at your "electrifying" poem! Blessings. Jo Linda Germain  12/17/04 Hey DS, A lady left a message for YOU on the bottom of MY poem... thought you might want another drop or two of encouragement! :0) ~KS~

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