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Topic: Blessed (11/29/04)

TITLE: Snow Blessings
By Teresa Lee Rainey
12/03/04

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“Mom, you’re so lucky. You get to stay home today.” Andrew is barely visible beneath his new winter coat, hat, gloves, and boots. He and Tim are getting ready to experience their first walk to school in snow.

While the idea of walking to school in snow may seem trivial to some children, my boys moved from an area where school is cancelled at the first sign of a snow flake. They woke up this morning with an excited scream of “No school!”. However, the local news quickly squashed their joy with an announcement of a two-hour late start rather than cancellation.

Fortunately, their disappointment was momentary as Andrew turned from the television and said, “ Well, if we have to go to school, at least we can have fun on the way there.”

It is fascinating to see how quickly children make the best out of any situation. They are now anxious to stomp through the snow on their way to school.

“You boys be sure to remember the school rule today. You can’t play in the snow once school starts or you will get a quiet room.”

“Thanks a lot for the reminder, Mom.” Although I can’t see Tim’s lip beneath his bundled layers, I’m sure he is performing the pre-teen pout. “Andrew is right. You are lucky to get to stay home today.”

“Oh yeah, I’m so lucky to be stuck inside today with housework. I’m so lucky to get to shovel snow off the driveway and try not to slip on the ice in the process of walking out our front door. I’m so…”

“Chill out, Mom. Sorry I said anything. See ya this afternoon.”

Before I can get another word in, both boys are half-way down the block. I suppose they aren’t too keen on hearing me complain about why I’m not lucky to be at home today. They could have waited a few more seconds and let me tell them good-bye. They even left the back door open in their hurry to get away.

As I slam the door shut, I begin to pace and complain. “Lord, why did you have to move us so far away from home? Why am I stuck in snow? Lucky? I’ve never had to deal with snow before and I don’t like it. I was suppose to go to town today for groceries and now I’m afraid to drive. Lucky? Did you see how the car slid a little on the way to church yesterday? I can’t drive on those icy streets. I’m trapped inside this house with a day full of housework. Yuck! What am I going to make for supper if I can’t go get groceries? Lucky? Why did you do this to me, Lord?”

Tears are forming streams down my cheeks as I collapse pathetically onto the couch.

Eventually I quiet down for a moment and a strange peace comes over me.

“My child, why are you complaining? You begged me to make a way for you to stay home for your husband and children . You told me you would go willingly, wherever I sent you. Look out the window and tell me what you see.”

Slowly, I force myself off the couch and peel back the curtain to take a peek. “Lord, I see a neighborhood covered in snow. I have to admit it is beautiful. Hey, I see a snow-plow clearing the road!”

“Look again, Child. What do you see?”

“Lord, I see my reflection. I see a stay-at-home mom. Look at me. I’m pathetic. I’m complaining because you have given me what I asked for. I‘m so sorry, Lord. Please forgive me.”

The snow outside brings an old song to mind and I begin to sing as I let the curtain fall back into place. “Oh, the blood of Jesus. It washes white as snow.”

Somehow the day has flown by, housework is done, and my husband is bringing home pizza. I know my Heavenly Father will protect me when I get the courage to go to the store, but that will be another day.

Right now I am watching Tim and Andrew. They are having a snow-ball fight on their way home and haven’t noticed me yet. I plan to tell them they were wrong about my being lucky to stay home today. I am not lucky. Luck has nothing to do with where I am. I am blessed.

Now let’s see how well I can throw a snow-ball!


Member Comments
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Lucian Thompson12/06/04
Teresa, your snowball hit a winner. This is a beautiful, seasonal, story that is warming to read. The message is wonderful, also. Great entry, dear lady.
Lynda Lee Schab 12/06/04
I always laugh when I hear about schools getting cancelled with the first snowflake. In Michigan, there practically has to be a blizzard or an ice storm for school to cancel.
Personally, I never complain about anything - HA! This piece sounded so much like me it's scary! :-) Thanks for the reminder to remember that what I have - material and non-tangible, has nothing to do with luck and everything to do with God.
Great job,
Lynda
Lois Jennison Tribble12/06/04
It's so awesome how we react when God gives us the desires of our heart--he never seems to do it the way we planned. Wonderful story, Teresa. God bless your family on this new adventure!
Debbie OConnor12/06/04
This is great! Not lucky...blessed! So true. Loved it.
Mitzi Busby12/06/04
Beautiful heartwarming story. Thanks for sharing. God bless you.
Melanie Page12/07/04
I would love to have this problem. We don't get any snow in my part of Australia. You guys are so lucky!
Maribel Estrada12/07/04
You can't begin to imagine the memories your story has stired up in me. I was born and raised in N.Y. and 29yrs. ago moved to Puerto Rico, haven't seen snow since then. I really miss it.
Deborah Anderson12/07/04
I really liked your story, Teresa. God bless you.
Jodi Hodge12/08/04
Teresa,
I loved your story. I am a stay-at-home mommy, and sometimes I get caught up in the "negatives" of it, and then something always makes me realize how truly blessed I am to get to stay home with my boys. Thank you for the "positive" nudge.
Marjorie Arrowood12/08/04
I too am from New York. Raised my kids in North Carolina and often wish they could have had the same snow experiences as I had in childhood. They are making up for it though. One married in December and went to Utah for a ski honeymoon.
Phyllis Inniss 12/10/04
Loved your story Teresa. I didn't experience much snow in London when I lived there; it quickly turned to slush, but I agree it makes a beautiful sight.
Verna Mull 01/02/09
Hey, you do great at prose too! I'm a little slow at trying that very much. I loved this article. God bless you. Verna Mull