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Topic: Insulted (11/01/04)

TITLE: Insulted.
By Jennifer Boyes
11/02/04

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You are so fat. Look at that stomach. Itís hideous.

And you are so lazy. Canít you ever get up off that couch and take care of your house?

Plus you are ignorant. Been in collage for 8 years and still a junior. Most people in school that long are considered to be doctors. But you, you are just hopeless. You should just give up.

You are going to be a waitress forever you know. Nothing. A nobody.

Come on. You are such a burden to your husband. You donít work, you barely clean. He should just leave you! Why would anyone so good as him love a loser like you? Loser, loser, loser!

Do you have any friends? I donít see anyone who really cares about you. They might tolerate you, but they donít really want to have anything to do with you. You bore them. And all of your complaining makes them sick.

Do you ever just shut up?

Your parents love your sisters better than you. They think that you are a huge disappointment.

Useless!
Ugly!
Boring!
Lazy!
Stupid!
Uninteresting!
Fat!
Useless
USELESS
USELESS!!!!!


ďMy child. Do not believe these lies of the enemy. Do you not see the holes in my hands and feet? Do you know know that I died for you and that my blood cleanses you white as snow? Do you not know that no matter who you were, in me you are perfect? Beautiful. My daughter, my beauty, my bride. You are mine! And I will not let the devil bring you down. I am always holding you. I will always love you. Take my hand, and I will not let you fall. You are mine for now, for always. I am your way, your truth, and your life. I AM your truth, and everything else is a lie.Ē


Member Comments
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DeAnna Brooks11/08/04
May each heart hear the words of Jesus spoken so eloquently in His assurancing love voiced here.
darlene hight11/08/04
Excellent! Thanks for exposing the liar once more to the truth.
Debbie OConnor11/08/04
Terrific and so TRUE! We all hear those awful lies, and we so desperately need the TRUTH you so eloquently expressed here. Very good.
Deborah Anderson11/08/04
Awww how heartwrenching to think people are treated this cruel, yet I know they are. Good message at the end. God bless you.
Mary Elder-Criss11/09/04
Very well written piece. The only improvement I could suggest would be to come up with an original title instead of simply using the topic as one.

Thanks for sharing.
Mary
Carolyn Greene11/09/04
Your entry really got me thinking.
Lucian Thompson11/11/04
Jennifer, Awesome! Granted, a better title would be great, but the message was superb. God never made an ugly human. They are all beautiful, but some can act ugly; thereby the whispers of Satan are heard.