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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY how it works   Previous Challenge Entry Topic: TEARS - (as in crying) (10/04/04) TITLE: Like Tylenol or Bayer By Monique Fox 10/04/04  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND There use to be liars, cheaters, and atheists In my life who caused me Tears, pain and anxiety. God saw my misery. God heard my prayer. God eased my pain like Tylenol or Bayer. With God’s help I had the strength you see To get rid of the negativity. I was able to separate myself from that which is not heavenly. Now I am living a life of tranquility. I have heard your prayer, I have seen your tears; behold, I will heal you. ~ 2 Kings 20:5~ PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE Member Comments Member Date Lynda Lee Schab  10/11/04 Monique, What a great title and a great message! If only it was longer to qualify for the editor's choice awards. Blessings, Lynda darlene hight 10/11/04 Nice piece! Teresa Lee Rainey 10/11/04 Enjoyed the title and the poem...wishing it were longer. Phyllis Inniss  10/11/04 It is so great when God heals our pain. The liars and cheats become a dim past. Blessings. addie mattern 10/11/04 I truly enjoyed this piece. It's a topic I feel pretty strongly on, isolating all the bad and hatred, finding God, and living a life devoted to Him no matter what people say or do. And you were able to say so much in such a little space. Very good! Norma OGrady 10/12/04 I enjoyed you poem good writing Yeshua bless Norma Deborah Porter  10/12/04 Monique, I agree with Lynda. It's a lovely little poem, but it's definitely under the word count limit and had to be disqualified (again). With love, Deb Corinne Smelker 10/12/04 I loved the last stanza of your poem - very strong and evocative. I think you could have expanded the first stanza slightly, this would also have brought you up to the word count. Apart from that, this is a lovely piece L.M. Lee 10/15/04 Couldn't agree more...God is good for all our aches! Rose Gingerich 10/16/04 Monique, Great piece, Short, but very sweet. Too bad it isn't long enough to qualify for the editor's choice award. Blessings, Rose Rita Garcia 10/19/04 Monique, You have a special gift. I enjoyed your writing style on your personal profile page. Keep writing as God directs. Love in Him, Rita

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