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Topic: Reward (09/27/04)

TITLE: Juggling in Place
By Linda Germain
10/03/04

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Wanted poster tells it all
Hanging crooked on the wall,
Jack McAlister McFloogin
Also known as: Jackie Mac, Mackie Jack
And sometimes Hoogy Doogin.
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Last seen in town clothes
Looking down his clown nose
Flopping in some big shoes
Running from the pig blues.

Out of breath and tired,
He was trying to stay hired,
Working for the big top,
And hoping for a break.

Jackie took the wrong road,
and fell into an episode.
Traded in some free time
For a dumb mistake.

Believing bad was permanent,
He led a life of crime,
Which offered a vacation place,
A chance to practice mime.

While incarcerated,
Mackie felt a ZAP .
A visit from an angel helped him wake up from a nap.

Dues paid, plans laid
Makie was released.
Having learned his lesson,
Bad behavior soon decreased

Being much convicted,
His goal was soon conflicted
By wheeling, stealing dirty dealing
Lowdown life with little feeling.

Tough scuff… Some rough stuff,
Jackie Mac had had enough.

No taste for waste or being chased,
He stopped performing deeds illegal
Wanting life more like an Eagle

Soaring high on being good
He hoped he would be understood
So… (gasp)

He opened up a storefront,
A beacon to the lost.
Always counting on the Lord,
But never counting cost.

In the nitty gritty city dirt,
Mac reached out to heal the hurt.
Winning souls by being bold,
Bringing more into the fold .

There was no lack of Godly purpose
Ballooning in the three-ring circus

Hoogy Doogin kept the pace
His floppy feet stayed in the race

He thought because he led a flock
There was a way to beat the clock,
That he could fly
Without a net,

And yet,
Spiraling down, hard working clown,
He stumped his toe and broke his crown.

Suffering from some dire disease
He could not stand on wobbly knees.
A side effect of working hard,
Now, hoisted on his own petard.

How was this a just REWARD?

Lord,
He cried
Before he died,
While I was in my prison bound,
You set my feet on solid ground

And led me to a lifelong stint
Slaving in that big top tent
Filled with things for me to tame
I did it all, in your good name

And now you give me all this pain.
Was what I did all done invain?

The Lord replied,
Oh my son, my heart,
You over-did, you came apart.
Refusing rest (you knew was best)
In this one thing you failed the test.

You could have gone on doing chores,
Opening eyes and swinging doors.
But you can’t keep your boat afloat
When no one else can have a vote.

Or offer lives to Kingdom sowing
If others can’t help with the rowing,
Assisting you to keep my sheep
While you retire for needed sleep.


Never bored,
He loved the Lord, but
Mackie-Jack, or Jackie-Mac,
Whatever name, he can’t come back.

To fill big shoes and be God’s clown.
That’s not good news,
It’s upside down.

Now he can see from up above
The next in line to preach God’s love.
Who’ll try to fill those awesome shoes
And always pay his over dues?

Not keep in shape for daily pace,
Soon, he or she will lose the race.
So all of those our dear Lord chose
Who preach and teach the gift, the Rose.

PlEASE take good care of you… for us.
God’s shepherd –driver of our bus
A load of sheep, we need your keep.

Who else would feed and lead
And weekly weed,
Show us the way to be set free?

We appreciate and honor all
The Ministers who took the call.

Your efforts will have great REWARD
But don’t spend rest you can’t afford.

With deep respect, we take to task
If you are tired, we plead, we ask
That unlike JackieMac and brothers
You can keep on blessing others.

On trapeze bar you’re flying high
A twinkling star up in sky
The speed of light,
Oh what a sight.

But please, we pray,
We need your lamp
To lead the way.
So just obey.

Don’t hesitate, instead,
Rejuvenate and clear your head.
It does not pay to just fly faster
When you fill the boots of Pastor,

We lift you to
The REAL Ring Master.







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Member Comments
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Linda Germain 10/04/04
Note: Typos were all repaired and ready to go but preview told me word count was over (it wasn't really). So...after RE-setting a few times, it finally agreed to let me in (how sweet!) so in excitement, I pressed "submit" and what left here was the original with typos, NOT the one cleaned up at the site. Does that make sense? You know I meant IN VAIN. Also, a "C" is missing. Oh well...it's not a heart attack. :0)
Anthony David10/04/04
An escellent verse indeed. The cadence is enjoyable. Am not so sure of the overall theme though. Could have been made a little tauter and clearer, I think. Any way God bless you for your effort!
Linda Germain 10/04/04
I am sorry, Anthony David! I write poetry with heavy METPHORICAL influence. It CAN be very confusing, especially if it is too regional. Sometimes in America we liken busy, over committed lives to being in a CIRCUS. If you have ever seen one, there are three rings of acts going at the same time and sometimes it is a little disconcerting trying to watch them all. PASTORS are notorious for being all things to all people and working too hard. I would say my theme is: Going the WRONG way lands Jackie Mac in a physical prison (reward for crime), but he sees the light and works for God with such intensity, though doing good, he hurts himself in the long run (Reward). I am admonishing our precious CLERGY to slow down and leave juggling 50 things at once to the real circus. We need them to shepherd us, often sheep who have gone astray. Did not mean to be so cryptic!Love in Christ, Linda Germain
Corinne Smelker10/04/04
Linda
Typos or not - this is an excellent piece - you and Glenn have an ability to put humour into even the most serious topics.

Loved this one!
L.M. Lee10/04/04
from the funny names all the way to the end...this was just plain fun!
Teresa Lee Rainey10/07/04
Oh Linda...This was right on track and sooo much fun. Your message came through loud and clear for me. You are one quick chick! Loved it! (click)
darlene hight10/07/04
Me too! I loved it! What an enjoyable read!


   
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