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Topic: Mountains (09/20/04)

TITLE: Elijah's Gauntlet
By Melanie Kerr
09/26/04

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The summons was given one morning,
"Mount Carmel. At dawn. Just be there."
They knew that it came from Elijah,
No warning that they should beware.

The next day they left in high spirits
Baal's prophets too many to count.
All on his own stood Elijah,
As they met at the top of the mount.

The scene was set for a showdown,
With blue cloudless skies spread above.
Elijah threw down his gauntlet,
"Choose today, the God you should love."

He told them to build up an altar,
With a layer of wood on the top,
Then to cut up their bull into pieces.
When ready, they were to stop,

The fire to burn up the offering
Wouldn't come from their lighted match.
That Baal must make his own fire,
And burn up the bull was the catch.

They were definitely up for the challenge,
Convinced that Baal would win.
The odds were too great for Elijah.
They thought that he would give in!

From morning to night they kept dancing,
Louder and louder they cried.
Some took to cutting their bodies.
There was nothing that they hadn't tried

The silence from Baal was deafening.
"Are you sure he's not sleeping in bed?"
Elijah laughed as he mocked them,
"Or away on vacation instead?"

Elijah repaired an old altar
With twelve stones he found on the ground.
He dug a deep ditch all around it.
They watched him not making a sound.

He cut up his bull into pieces,
And then laid it down on the wood,
And then he doused it with water
As only an idiot would.

The crowd by this time had grown quiet,
Remembering stories of old.
This wasn't just some foolish action,
But birthed in a faith strong and bold.

The water, so scarce, was an offering
Saying, "God, it's the best I can give.
I know, for myself that you're real.
If I'm wrong, I've no reason to live."

He lifted his hands to the heavens,
The earth damp beneath his bare feet.
The crowd and the contest had faded.
His gaze on his God was complete.

Then fire from heaven was falling.
The bull and the wood were destroyed.
The stones, the water and soil burnt,
As fire from God's hand was deployed.

The people fell down and they trembled.
They cried, "There's no one but You.
Forgive us, for we are Your people
And You are our God - this is true!"

Elijah commanded the people
To kill the prophets of Baal.
With passion and zeal they slaughtered
Leaving a blood sodden trail.

To sit on the fence is no option.
We must stand on the side of our God,
And build on the faith of Elijah,
And walk the bold path that he trod.

No matter that hundreds may face us
And challenge the faith in our heart
With God on our side we are winners.
And the enemy? Taken apart.


Member Comments
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L.M. Lee09/27/04
just wonderful the way you told this great story as a poem.
Norma OGrady09/28/04
wonderful poem
Yeshua bless
Norma
Carol Shaffron09/28/04
Very imaginitive and creative---using your talents to make the Bible come alive and speak to people's hearts more interestingly than reading the account --- though that is important.
Glenda Lagerstedt09/29/04
Love that closing line! Great job.
Glenda Lagerstedt09/29/04
Actually, I like that closing line so much that I have copied down that whole last verse and am committing to memory.
WENDY DECKER09/30/04
Awesome way to tell a story. I truly enjoyed it from begin to end. Your an excellent poet.
Rita Garcia09/30/04
Melanie, Well written, I have read two of your articles, I will make an effort to read more, what a blessing your writing is. Blessings, Rita
Jessica Gingerich10/02/04
This is a wonderful poem! I've always loved that story of Elijah and now you've made it become even more real. Thanks! May God keep inspiring you to write!
Desert Rose10/02/04
Beautifully written and what a statement, "I know for myself that you are real. If I am wrong I've no reason to live." Without God there is no Love or Wisdom. All we are left with is our sins and our struggles. Therefore there is no hope or life without our Lord and Savior.


   
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