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Topic: Pets (09/13/04)

TITLE: Whenever
By Monique Fox
09/17/04

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Whenever
By Monique Nicole Fox

Whenever I pat a dog or cat pet,
Whenever I seek a tree for shade,
Whenever I walk on some green grass,
Whenever I run my feet through some beach sand,
Whenever I gaze at the blue sky, stars or moon,
Whenever the rain that quenches the earth,
Whenever the rainbow appears in the clouds,
I see. I ponder.
And I remember Godís covenant and treaty
with all beings including me.
Many poems get written; lots of poetry.


"Whenever the rainbow appears in the clouds, I will see it and remember the everlasting covenant between God and all living creatures of every kind on the earth." ~Genesis 9:16~


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Teresa Lee Rainey09/20/04
God's promise is always with us 'whenever'. I like that idea. . . though I failed to understand the correlation between your idea and the last line of your poem. Not that I am any poet's critic...just my humble opinion that the poem reads well without it.
Marina Rojas09/20/04
A very abstract look at the challenge topic. That God is your focus is a delight.
L.M. Lee09/24/04
nice to tie in simple activities like petting our animals to God's promises.