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Topic: Rain (09/07/04)

TITLE: Each drop of rain counts to drench my heart
By sharmila sanka
09/11/04

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Multiplication of heavy drops of rain water are only to multiply my happiness. The joy I feel when it rains is unimaginable. Not only my outer body but my little heart inside of it is also drenched when it rains. Rain is like the showers of the Lord gracing equally all the beings below.
Oh Rain, what thanks can I render for the cool gifts you shower on us when the Sun competes to its peaks with its heat and fades away to the mountains with your coolness ? Do you see the happiness in the eyes of the children when they see you coming from above? The breeze itself turns cool with your touch. The gardens await your arrival so that they can live longer happily.
You are so romantic and you reach your partner the Earth so swiftly. How can I ever forget the way you sojourn from your birth place the sky and from your home the clouds to land and soothen the sons of the earth and the earth itself? Arenít you ever thirsty? You always drench our thirst and the only moment you drench yours is when you become one with the earth. Upon that romantic earth I am living my life and it is only because of every drop of yours that my heart is filled with never ending Love.


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Teresa Lee Rainey09/13/04
"Rain is like the showers of the Lord gracing equally all the beings below."
I like the way that reads.
Teresa
darlene hight09/15/04
I like the way this reads it is very good from the opening line of multiplying raindrops.
Good job!