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Previous Challenge Entry
Topic: Breaking the Rules (08/16/04)

TITLE: Me, Myself and I
By Monique Fox
08/17/04

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Breaking the rules
No not me
I aspire to places heavenly

Breaking the rules
No not myself
Giving my all to the Great Physician
For my eternal health

Breaking the rules
No not I
I follow the commandments and covenants
Of God up high

Breaking the rules
No not me, myself or I
Since 1969 and until the day I die


Member Comments
Member Date
Norma OGrady08/23/04
Enjoyed your poem!
I liked the Me, Myself and I
Yeshua bless
Melanie Kerr 08/24/04
Great poem. You had structure and balance spot on.
Lucian Thompson08/24/04
Your poem broke another rule…a woman never gives away her age!
Sheila Boyd08/26/04
Good poem.
L.M. Lee08/26/04
nice way to look at the heart of obedience