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Topic: Exams (07/26/04)

TITLE: You Got To Be Out Of Your Mind!
By Lucian Thompson
07/26/04

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Ah, another day at the Sweat Factory, School that is. Surely this will be a better day than yesterday. I don’t know why my English class has to be my first class of the day. Someone up there must hate me as much as I hate English.

Mrs. Handbury is nice enough, but she expects me to give a hoot about all that conjugating stuff that won’t mean a hill of beans in the future. I can speak this language, can’t I? Certainly I don’t need to know how a car motor works to be able to drive it, do I? Don’t need no dangling participles cluttering up my mind either.

Mrs. Handbury said, “Sit down Thompson, and keep quiet. It’s time for the exam to begin. Get your football off the desk and try to act like you are happy to be here.”

“You got to be out of your mind, Teach. Not another exam! We just had one last week, didn’t we?”

“Yes, Thompson, we did. I remember that your grade on that exam was a 48 so I figured you would just jump at the chance to better your last effort, right?”

Oh, man, I am over this. I just don’t do well on exams, never have! I think exams are a commie plot to discourage young men like me. Football, now, that builds your body as well as your mind! Why can’t old Mrs. Hatchet Puss ease up on me like the other teachers do? They know that my abilities at Football will get me a college education, so what’s the big deal? Oooo…I hate exams!

Wow, it’s as vivid as if it just happened. That was 45 years ago, and I am still haunted by my attitude then. If I had only known how much I would need proper writing and communication skills to function well in this old world, perhaps I would have studied more.

Funny, I have such fond memories of Mrs. Handbury but those teachers who placated me; well I can’t even remember any of their names now. I know now that Mrs. Handbury cared enough about me to expect more from me that a little excitement from a Friday night football game.

My football days are long gone. An injury nixed that college chance, but my need to write and be able to express myself grows the older I get. So much to say after so many years of living and I have a hard time now because of my hatred of exams then.

Mrs. Handbury. I am sorry it took me so long to hear you. Oh, and, I’ll never forget you!


Member Comments
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Patricia Sheets08/02/04
Lucian, You must have learned something in English class. You are a very, very gifted writer! This article should be manditory reading for all high school sports players. There is indeed life after high school.
Corinne Smelker08/02/04
Very very good - really enjoyed the internal dialgue - very realistic
darlene hight08/02/04
Great Article!
Deborah Anderson08/02/04
I enjoyed the humor you injected into this and the love. Thank you and God bless you.
Dori Knight08/02/04
mrs. handbury did a far better job than you might believe. well done!
Karen Treharne08/02/04
You've learned a lot in those years I see, Lucian. She would be proud of you. You must have learned more than you realized, because your writing skills are showing. You have my vote for honesty, humbleness, gratitude, bravery, and growth...oh, and of course, a well put together article. Enjoyed this very much.
Mary Elder-Criss08/03/04
I really enjoyed this piece. Very well written, great flow, and funny. Good ending, as well. Thanks for sharing. Mary
Lisa Beaman08/05/04
Very Good! I liked this one a lot. Good humor, good truth.
Tatjana A08/26/04
Thanks for taking the time to note me and encourage me. Your teacher would be smiling ear to ear after reading this article. I will be back to enjoy more - God bless you as you grow in Him (hugs)
Dave Mulford01/03/05
It has been 5 years since I was there. I can relate. I was too busy "expanding my mind" outside the classroom and was too tired in the morning to pay attention. I did love it, but was not focused on the meat of it. I only ever wanted to create. I am realizing that in order to create sometimes you need more tools. I wish I had those tools. Great lesson learned, by both of us....Thanks


   
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