Hire
Writers
Editors
Home Tour About Read What's New Help Forums Join
My Account Login
Shop
Save
Support
E
Book
Store
Learn
About
Jesus
  

Four Ways For A Christian Writer To Win A Publishing Package HERE



The HOME for Christian writers! The Home for Christian Writers!
The Official Writing Challenge

BACK TO
CHALLENGE
MAIN

INSTRUCTIONS

how it works
submission rules
guidelines for
choosing a level

ENTRIES

submit your entry
read current entries
read past entries
challenge winners



Our Daily Devotional HERE
Place it on your site or
receive it daily by email.





TRUST JESUS TODAY

TRY THE TEST



how it works   Submit

Previous Challenge Entry
Topic: Elementary School (07/19/04)

TITLE: The War of the Worms
By Lynne Gaunt
07/19/04

 LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE
 SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT
 SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND

The clouds hung heavy and thick overhead
More gray in this light than black.
The thunder that rattled our windows last night
Was gone but threatened to be back.

The grass was soggy, the earth fully soaked
As happens after steady, strong rain.
The earthworms that tunnel beneath our feet
Were forced from the ground once again.

Half-heartedly trying to stay out of puddles
As off to school we trotted that day,
The worms, so plentiful all over the street
Made a challenge to find a clear way.

The playground at school was already buzzing
As we caught up with our friends playing ball.
I noticed some boys on the edge of the pavement
Watching the earthworms wiggle and crawl.

I focused my thoughts on the game at hand
The other girls were already playing.
When out of the blue the boys charged in
Holding worms before us dangling and swaying.

“Eeeww! Gross! Get away!” my playmates cried.
The worms flew, the boys were all howling.
All my friends screamed and darted away,
But I refused and stood there, just scowling.

I picked up the worms and flung them right back!
My attack caught them all off guard.
But the next thing I knew, a full war had erupted
Worms flying all over the school yard!

At first our skirmish went undetected
By the teacher on duty, Miss Grace
But then she looked up to see a fat worm
Fly from my hand to hit a boy’s face!

Miss Grace shuffled across the playground,
“Young lady!” she called clear and loud.
Dozens of hands silently dropped their weapons
A stillness fell over the crowd.

“What is the meaning of all this commotion?
Your behavior is full of disgrace!
Go and put your nose up against that wall,
And don’t let me see your face!”

“But Miss Grace!” I began to argue.
“It wasn’t me who started this mess!”
“Enough!” she retorted, unwilling to listen,
And others not willing to confess.

I stood with my nose against the wall.
All the rest of the playtime I fumed.
I was ready to exact my revenge,
The War of the Worms would resume!

Perhaps the Lord intervened that day
For the afternoon grew bright and sunny.
The worms were gone when school let out.
The episode now just seemed funny.

But thirty years later these thoughts re-emerge
On a morning still wet from spring rain
When worms again cover the pavement
Thoughts of the war fill my mind again.

In my skirt and my heels I stoop to the ground
And choose a particularly fat one.
Vengeance it seems will be mine at last!
Now to end the battle I’d not begun.

The man in the bathroom who’s tying his tie
Doesn’t know that he should be wary.
The boy, you see, who started that war,
Is the man I chose to marry.


Member Comments
Member Date
Corinne Smelker 07/26/04
Excellent, excellent! I laughed at the ending stanzas! I think you have a winner here.
darlene hight07/26/04
Loved this!Hmm...a lifetime of opportunity for revenge of the worms
KAREN FASIG07/26/04
WONDERFUL, MARVELOUS,HILLARIOUS!

Did you really throw the worm at him? My vote goes here without further thought.

Angela Moore07/26/04
Wonderful poem! Your rhythm made it so easy to follow the story. How adorable!
Lynda Lee Schab 07/26/04
Lynne,
Loved it, loved it, loved it! Loved everything about it - the humor, the visuals, the verses!
Loved it! (but I guess you know that by now)
Blessings, Lynda Schab
Deborah Anderson07/26/04
What can I say? I loved it, loved it, loved it. You truly had me belly laughing for the second time on here today.
I loved the rhyme, rhythm, humor and storytelling you packed into this delightful poem.
Very well done! God bless you.
Deborah Anderson07/26/04
Wow, LOL. I didn't realize until the screen just came up that Lynda and I both loved it, loved it, loved it. That's what you call being one in the spirit and sisters in Christ!
:-)
L.M. Lee07/26/04
Oh this was toooooooooooo cute!
Gary Warren07/26/04
Beautiful poem/story!
The last line gave me goose bumps (in a good way).
Marcell Billinghurst07/27/04
A very humorous poem
Very well written. I could picture it in my mind. It would have been interesting to know where the last worm landed. Your poem ended on a note of suspense. Let the fun begin.
Marina Rojas07/27/04
This was absolutely delightful! Kept my attention all the way through--and the ending just put the icing on the cake! This was really wonderful!
Tammy S. Eudy07/28/04
You hooked me with the title, and had my attention all the way through. I adored the ending! Great humor!!!!!!
Jan Warrick07/29/04
I love this poem!!! I read it to my kids and they laughed so hard tears ran down their faces. You have my vote!!!!
Karen Treharne07/29/04
Oh Lynne, this is so well written and with an absolutely great surprise ending. I loved it! You must be a very fun person to be around, even if you don't mind handling worms!
Lisa Beaman07/30/04
I have to confess that I'm not good with poems. They usually lose my interest. But after I read the comments of the other readers, I made the effort. I'm glad I did - what a hoot! I didn't see the surprise end coming! Thanks, that was great!
Nita Frazier08/02/04
I remember tiptoing around worms. I neverthought of throwing them! I loved this - it gave me a delightful chuckle. I wish I hadn't used up my votes.