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Corinne Smelker 06/14/04
This was a nice collection of stories, but I am not sure what the point was, or whether it was just to put down some memories.

I did like the 1,000 pound fish! WOW!
Melanie Kerr 06/15/04
There is an enthusiasm that comes through your words. You certainly know about fish, but the article doesn't go anywhere.
Lynne Gaunt06/17/04
This is a great start, Ray. Here's a suggestion: maybe you could add another paragraph or two about how we are all loved the same in God's eyes - rich, poor, righteous, needy, young old...
that might bring a closure to the theme you started with a fish is a fish is a fish... As is, your article has a nice feeling and seems to close, but you haven't told us anything to think about. It needs an application or something.
L.M. Lee06/19/04
cute story! a look at fish in all kinds of venues! ;-)