This is a great start, Ray. Here's a suggestion: maybe you could add another paragraph or two about how we are all loved the same in God's eyes - rich, poor, righteous, needy, young old...
that might bring a closure to the theme you started with a fish is a fish is a fish... As is, your article has a nice feeling and seems to close, but you haven't told us anything to think about. It needs an application or something.