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Topic: Fishing (06/07/04)

TITLE: FISHING!!
By JOYCE MEHAFFIE
06/07/04

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I can tell you how many times I went fishing with family and friends and had a good time.

I can tell when someone is just new to fishing cause they are on slippery rocks, their feet are going evey which way and finally fall in and soaking wet. You can get a big laugh out of this when you see this in person.

I know what it is like for I two did the same thing at one time and you learn from experience, what to do.

How many fish did I catch? Well, let me tell you I caught more trees and rocks than fish but once in awhile I catch mini size fish that seem to weigh a ton. I did catch a trout one day and I lost the picture to prove it.

Hope you all have a good laugh.


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Phyllis Inniss 06/14/04
Well, you did say you went "Fishing"
Melanie Kerr 06/14/04
I have been fishing just twice. It is not someething I enjoyed.

Try to read through your work or get someone esle to do it for you as there are one or two mistakes.
Marie B. Corso06/15/04
You have a way of painting word pictures that can do nothing but get better. Among others, here are some things to fix if you post this article on your page.

"and finally fall in and soaking wet".
And, when you used "TWO" you meant "TOO".
L.M. Lee06/18/04
cute!