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Dan Blankenship 05/31/04
I must say that I had mixed emotions on this one; the descriptive words were great, but I wasn't sure where I was being led by this poem. It needs a little more direction. That's just my opinion. I'm not much of a poetry writer.

God Bless!
Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Kevin Kindrick05/31/04
Hope is indicated at the end. I'd like to see what comes next. Keep it up.
God bless
L.M. Lee06/02/04
very interesting...I could feel the worms crawling on me! YUCK! can't wait to see the conclusion.
Lynne Gaunt06/04/04
Wow. You've done a great job setting the mood for this poem. What happens next?