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Lynne Gaunt05/25/04
I loved your lines about your vocabulary shirt. Nice visual image.
Melanie Kerr 05/26/04
If this relates to "paths", I am missing it. Some of your couplets were very descriptive
"The sleeves of my 'vocabulary shirt' are a bit short,
So cannot stretch my arms to pick the words I want"
I often feel that way and your words express the idea very well.
Marie B. Corso05/26/04
Though it's off the topic, it's a great poem and a super title.
L.M. Lee05/26/04
good poem.
Leticia Caroccio05/27/04
The topic of "paths" is so varied. Your article didn't mention the word itself, but its direction was clear that you are, in fact, on the path to the will of God.

I found this poem interesting. It showed originality and vulnerability. It showed heart. Very nicely done.