The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 1311 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
07/14/06
Thought-provoking...I think I have to read this again and again to appreciate the message.
07/15/06
I humbly 'fess up to my ignorance. I don't understand any part of this obviously beautiful poetic form of free verse; however, I did look for this weeks topic... "Great", and couldn't even find that. Perhaps I need glasses, more education, a shrink? It is probably ME that needs critiquing...not the writer. (smile)
07/15/06
This is an interesting poem! Is this based on St John who wrote the gospel? Did he get buried alive, standing up or am I reading this too literally? An author’s note might help here!
07/15/06
Yes, this is John--Eagle of God See, John 11:3--John 19:26,27--John 21:20-25--Lots of stories on John's natural death.