The Official Writing Challenge
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Very moving. I'm not always a rhyming-verse sort of reader, but this was truly exceptional. I liked it.
I think most of us feel like this at times, challenged to trust in God's sovereignty.
There were some inconsistencies in meter, but they didn't detract from the message, which was expressed with some excellent word choices, and lovely alliteration.
I love how you start in a place of darkness and then end in the light of the Word. This is powerful. Congratulations on ranking 13th overall! Happy Dance!