The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, this is such an intense and powerful piece. I could feel the weight of the burden in your MC's voice. You did a superb job of allowing the pain and fear just ooze from the page. I felt as if I could be reading a Psalm; it was hauntingly beautiful while still a glimmer of hope as we look towards the Light!
Ditto Shann's comment, as I felt I was reading a responsorial Psalm throughout, a cry for light and mercy.
09/04/13
Beautiful, moving, intense, gripping, and mesmerizing!

I loved it....thank you!

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 24 overall!